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Writings > Raevyn's Stories, Poems, etc.

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message 2: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 07, 2015 01:48PM) (new)

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message 3: by Carolyn, The God of Angel Armies (new)

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The first one was clever :) I liked it. Constructive criticism on the second-maybe make it sound less typical?

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message 4: by [deleted user] (last edited Jul 22, 2015 04:31AM) (new)

Thanks:) But what do you mean? What's typical--the plot, the writing....?
No offense, I just don't quite understand.

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message 5: by Carolyn, The God of Angel Armies (new)

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This type of note has been written about a lot so maybe something to make the situation seem fresh and different?