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message 1: by Scarlett (new)

Scarlett | 62 comments Mod
((When you're done it's totally accepted! XD))


ᒥAᴍᴀᴛᴇʀᴀsᴜᒧ  (lordofdarkness) | 24 comments << you peeked! ∑(゚Д゚) Nyuu~ why? I still had to take the demigod stuff out.>>


message 3: by ᒥAᴍᴀᴛᴇʀᴀsᴜᒧ (last edited Aug 08, 2015 01:57PM) (new)

ᒥAᴍᴀᴛᴇʀᴀsᴜᒧ  (lordofdarkness) | 24 comments [Name] Anaralia McCrowley
[Nickname(s)] Ana
[Age] 18
[Gender] Female
[Birthplace] New York City, St. Nicholas Hotel, Room 127
[Birthdate] September 19, 1998
[Parents] Nathan McCrowley, Rachel Hugh
[Appearance]

[Description]
She is 5' 8' and has a wingspan that started at five feet, but eventually become 17 feet across. Before being experimented on, she had stormy grey eyes, and black hair. The color of her wings are a dark blueish black, darker than fang's. on the undersides of her wings, the covert feathers are a light blue color. Over the tops and down the backs of her wings, she has shiny, strong black feathers fading perfectly into the blue underneath.
She is implied to be the stronger than the others in the flock and also to have the DNA of a raven.
[Personality]
Anaralia is tough, sarcastic, and hates "girliness". She is independent, strong, and fierce.
She is adventurous and is fond of danger.
She is a very protective girl. She stays calm in times of need. She is aggressive when people mess with her flock. She is admired for who she is and what she has done. She puts others before herself. People fear her power but respect her.
She is kind and caring when need to be. And tough and cold when approached at first. she is somewhat patient, getting irritated if something takes too long though and is very observant. She usually has a serious look on her face. When around her flock Anaralia acts as a motherly figure to the Flock, such as nurturing them and looking out for them.
[Weapon] Her Mind
[Character Flaws]
While at the School, the whitecoats attempted an experiment to enhance Her night vision, but failed, although she did not become blind like iggy. Her eyes did change to white making her look like she is blind but she isnt. she doesnt feel pain or anything.
[Strengths] Fast, cunning, Intelligent, and strong
[Weaknesses] Spiders *shivers*
[Likes]
The Flock, Children, Freedom
[Dislikes] The School, Erasers, Whitecoats, etc.
[Biography]
Anaralia was born a normal child, no wings or anything. She lived a pretty normal life until she got kidnapped one day and woke up in a cage. Her body forever changed and having wings now. She no longer remembered anything of her old life.
[powers/skills]
Fighting skills- Anaralia learned how to fight and defend herself from all the battles she had to go through against the erasers. She fights in a mixed martial arts style. It helps that she and the Flock are much stronger than regular humans, so she can easily defeat most (non-mutant) grown men.
Speed- She also has the ability to fly extremely fast, her top speed at roughly 260–280 miles per hour or over 300 miles per hour in a fast dive.

Breathing underwater-Anaralia develops gills when she is swimming in the water

Electrokinesis- she can control electricity and conduct it through her body

Like other members of her Flock, Ana's body is equipped with enhanced reflexes which are displayed in combat and sudden danger. In addition, her sight is greatly enhanced and is referred to as "raptor vision". Also like the Flock, she has an internal compass which can gauge distance, wind currents, and magnetic direction.
She also is able to read/communicate telepathically with others.

[Flock] Storm


message 4: by Scarlett (new)

Scarlett | 62 comments Mod
Sorry! But accepted!!!


ᒥAᴍᴀᴛᴇʀᴀsᴜᒧ  (lordofdarkness) | 24 comments Oops I forgot. She's in the storm flock.


message 6: by Scarlett (last edited Aug 08, 2015 10:12PM) (new)

Scarlett | 62 comments Mod
Under Construction!
{Identity}

[Name:] Shin
[Nickname:] N/A
[Age:] 16
[Grade:] ? (Doesn't really attend school, yet)
[Blood Type:] B+
[Star Sign:] Unknown
[Date of Birth:] Unknown
[Favorite Color:] Gray

{Orientation}

[Gender:] Male
[Sexuality:] Bisexual
[Relationship Status:] Open
[Crush:} None
[Race:] English
[Species] Human, Part Raven


{Appearance:}

description

{Personality}

[Description:] Shin is a mysterious kind of person. He doesn't like talking and is really smart. He loves to fly and does it a lot.
[Deadly Secrets and Things to Know:] He likes someone (who I don't know)
[Flaws:] His distrust for people and sometimes his own flock
[Virtues:] Powerful wings, combat,
[Favorite Things:] Flying, unknown girl
[History:] TBRP'd

{Other Details:}

Flock: Breaking Dawn Flock
[Stability:] 9/10
[Friends:] His flock is the only people she can trust
[Enemies:] Whitecoat
[Family:] Unknown, but he considers it her flock
[Other:]


message 7: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 08, 2015 05:32PM) (new)

description
"For the last time, I'm not reading your childish notes"

{Identity}

[Name:] Kurisu Tachibana
[Nickname:] Kuri
[Age] 15
[Blood Type:] O
[Star Sign:] Capricorn
[Favourite colour] Red. In any form or shape
[Date of Birth:] January 18
[Theme Song:] Romeo and Cinderella by Hatsune Miku
Corrupted Flower by Kagamine Rin and Kagamine Len
Regret Message by Kagamine Rin

description
"Why on earth are you poking my cheek?!"

{Orientation}

[Gender:] Female
[Sexuality:] Heterosexual
[Relationship Status:] Single
[Crush:] None
[Race:] European/Japanese
[Religion] Cares not for a certain religion, however still believes in the prospect of god and the devil
[Species:] Avian (view spoiler)

description
"No problem's to big to overcome. Logic and common sense always prevail"

{Appearance:}

description
(view spoiler)

Released Form (view spoiler)
description
(view spoiler)
[Hair:] waist-length, reddish hair; her hair ranges in ginger shades all the way from mahogany to auburn. She prefers to let her hair hang loose.
[Eyes:] dull blue to violet eyes
[Weight:] 45kg
[Height:] 160cm
[Scent:] New books and subtle hints of lavender perfume
[Scarring or Markings:] none
[Clothing Style:]
She has an unusual fashion statement, with her outfit being composed of a white long-sleeved blue-rimmed dress shirt. Her shirt is tucked into a pair of black shorts on top of black tights, held up by a white belt with a gold buckle. Her red tie hangs loosely around her collar, and she wears a loose khaki jacket that covers her upper thighs, and has black and white straps at the end of both sleeves and the rim which are used to keep the entire jacket on her arms. She also wears a pair of black boots which are partially unzipped and folded down.
description

{Personality}

[Description:]
Unlike people of her age, Kurisu has shown a more mature attitude, usually calm and collected even when someone is acting tense in front of her. However, she can also show a much more timid side at times. She has been described as a tsundere by many of her close colleagues time and time again. She has proven to be greatly annoyed by their paranoid tendencies. Her accomplishments in spite of her youth have exposed Kurisu to the jealousy of those who consider themselves her betters. As a result, she has adopted an acerbic attitude that functions to hide her vulnerabilities. At heart, Kurisu is a very curious girl who loves science and can't resist an interesting experiment. She occasionally makes statements - for example, that data collection should be considered before a subject's privacy - that have led people to dub her a fellow mad scientist. Kurisu does not approve.
Though she's hesitant to admit it, she's a frequent user of the text board @Channel, donning the identity "KuriGohan and Kamehameha". Rintarou likes to trick her into admitting this habit, much to her chagrin. When posting on @channel her personality is noticeably different, as she often uses Netspeak or emoticons to communicate and her posts are generally much less mature than her usual dialogue.

[Deadly Secrets and Things to Know:] She is extremely observant and knows pretty much everything about everyone. It makes it hard to keep secrets from her. And she despises liars
[Flaws:]
-Too truthful
-Takes her work extremely seriously
-Hates people who aren't straight to the point
-Has a bit of a humanitarian approach to life
-Hates being the creature she is

[Virtues:]
+Extremely knowledgeable
+She knows what she'd talking about
+Plays along with situations extremely well
+Takes negative criticism as a positive
+Loves to debate her point in a good mannered and for-fun-and-advancement swing

[Favorite Things:]
-Reading
-Reading
-Reading
-Experiments
-Science
-Listening to Vocaloids and spending time on her computer
-Sitting in the garden in fresh air
-Being in the fresh air observing things

[History:]
Kurisu was born in a test tube in a lab. Sure, the scientists had done 96% human and 4% bird experiments which were successful, but they then felt the need to experiment whether you could fuse more than one species animal with a human. And poor Kurisu happened to be that experiment. They made Kurisu run through mazes with a cattle prod and fed her through plastic tubed shoved down her throat. The performed surgeries on her while she was still fully conscious. But worst of all, once they were done with her, They wiped her memory and made her a blank slate. One that was ready for new writing. They trained Kurisu in science and biology, and she grew up to become one of them. She remembered nothing of her heritage, and she loved science and experiments. It when she met Gumi that her world changed. Gumi, a fellow mutant experiment, told her of what the scientists did to her. Despite that fact, it didn't sway Kurisu and her pursuit of a career in science. She tries to deny her heritage as much as she can, even though it's impossible.

description
https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/...
"And in those 5 seconds, my life changed. For the better or worse...I can't say"

{Other Details:}

[Stability:] 10
[Friends:] All of her colleagues
[Enemies:] Too many to list.
[Family:] The Breaking Daw flock


description
"If this is meant to be apple juice, then why does it taste like water?"

Flock Breaking Dawn

Abilities
x-The ability to fly at top speeds exceeding 690km/h
x-She had shown to have powers of telekinesis, mind control and mind reading
x-Far-sighted focus- the ability to focus her vision on objects far away
x-She is equipped with enhanced reflexes which are displayed in combat and sudden danger, her sight is greatly enhanced and she has an internal compass, distance gauge, wind currents detection system and sense magnetic direction.


description


message 8: by Scarlett (new)

Scarlett | 62 comments Mod
((Did you copy this from Kuroshitsuji ACademy?)) And accepted! Besides the house part, you know... XP


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

((Omg XD I forgot to take that out. And yeah, she was my character in Kuroshitsuji academy))


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

((Omg XD I forgot to take that out. And yeah, she was my character in Kuroshitsuji academy))


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

((Ahhhhh! I'm fangirling so hard at Emilia Heart's face claim! Its Shin!!! *faints8))


message 12: by Scarlett (new)

Scarlett | 62 comments Mod
I love Shin!!!


message 13: by Scarlett (new)

Scarlett | 62 comments Mod
((Yeah I was going to make a girl, but made it a male. So now it's Shin...


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

(((Ahhhhhhh!!!! I'm crying!!!! (nTToTTn) ))


message 15: by Scarlett (new)

Scarlett | 62 comments Mod
((LOL XD))


message 16: by ᒥAᴍᴀᴛᴇʀᴀsᴜᒧ (last edited Aug 09, 2015 11:39AM) (new)

ᒥAᴍᴀᴛᴇʀᴀsᴜᒧ  (lordofdarkness) | 24 comments

Would you stop staring at my face, It's creepy and I'm starting to get the urge to punch you.

{Identity}

[Name] Ryuuichi Shun
[Nickname(s)] Rui, Shun, Ryuu
[Age] 19
[Birthday] June 13
[Star Sign] Gemini
[Blood Type] B
[Favorite Color(s)] Green, White, and Black

{Orientation}

[Gender] Female
[Sexuality] Heterosexual
[Relationship Status] Single
[Crush] None
[Race] German/Japanese
[Religion] Doesn't really care if God exists or if the devil does too, neither helped her in her time of need so she doesn't care for them at all.
[Species] Hybrid
(view spoiler)

{Appearance}

"Oh, don't mind me. I'm just sitting here because I want to be alone. So go away and don't bother me."



Shun is a tall, slender woman and has shoulder length, messy blonde hair. She has light green eyes and very small, but thick eyebrows the same color as her hair. Her body is almost entirely covered with piercings, and she has bandages wrapped on both of her hands. In total, she has at least 24 piercings covering her body, though only the ones on her face are visible. She has 15ft wings that are pure white, unlike the other members in her flock that dark wings.

[Hair] Shun has long messy blonde hair that is in layers and reaches down to her waist, while in the front it falls to her shoulders.
[Eyes] the shape of her eyes is slightly narrowed and her pupils are a light green color.
[Weight] 101 lbs
[Height] 5' 4"
[Scent] Shun smells of sweets, from all the treats she eats.
[Scarrings or Markings]
[Clothing Style]


{Personality}

[Description]
Tbrp'd

[Deadly Secrets and Things to Know]
Shun is a very strong person and will beat you to a pulp if you annoy her or say something offending to one of her flock members.
[Flaws]
- indifferent to others who aren't from her flock
- rarely shows her emotions
- says whatever is on her mind, even if some the things she says are perverted
- has a sweet tooth
[Virtues]
+ incredibly strong
+ an amazing hacker
+ can stay calm during dire situations
+ keeping a straight face

[Favorite Things]
-Anything sweet
-Reading
-Technology
- her allmates
-Bunnies
-Sitting in the garden in fresh air
-Being in the fresh air observing things
{Other Details}

[Stability] 7
[Friends] whoever she likes or is close to.
[Enemies] anyone she doesn't like.
[Family]
Noiz - Older Brother
Shadow Flock

[Flock] Shadow

[Abilities]
-Shun has incredible Hacking Skills and can even go inside electronics and mess with them.
-The ability to fly as fast as sound
-She has shown to be able to attract any type of metal towards her at will
-Raptor Vision- objects that are far away and most people wouldn't be able to see, are easily visible to her.
- enhanced reflexes which are displayed in combat and sudden danger, greatly enhanced eyesight and she has an internal compass, distance gauge, wind currents detection system and sense magnetic direction.
- Shun has a variety of objects attached to her clothes. These though aren't just accessories but highly advanced forms of technology that can be used for multiple things.


message 17: by ♀ѕαgιттαяιυѕ_яσѕє♀ (last edited Aug 09, 2015 02:38PM) (new)

♀ѕαgιттαяιυѕ_яσѕє♀  (SagittariusRose) | 9 comments First and last name: Willow
Age: 17
Gender: female
Appearance:
Weakness: spiders, bugs, hurt dogs
Personality: Willow is sarcastic, but keeps to herself most of the time. She doesn't speak much, as she can telepathically speak to anyone of her choice. She is very fierce and mischievous, with a knack for stealing things. She likes to play tricks on people, and enjoys feeling overpowering. Although she is very smart, strong, and constantly fueled by anger or sadness, she has a soft side for dogs. Especially puppies.
Additional info/ history: Willow never knew the meaning of love. She only knew hurt and torture. She didn't escape the School until she was 14. Always convinced she was a test tube baby, she never bothered to look for her family. She feels a strong longing to always be with her flock, but doesn't know how to love them.
And finally choose what flock you would like to be in:
~ shadow flock
Other: she has a winged dog named Goose.



message 18: by Scarlett (new)

Scarlett | 62 comments Mod
Accepted!


♀ѕαgιттαяιυѕ_яσѕє♀  (SagittariusRose) | 9 comments Thanks! I'll add pic now...


ᒥAᴍᴀᴛᴇʀᴀsᴜᒧ  (lordofdarkness) | 24 comments I hadn't been done with my second charrie, but now I am.

So yeah...


message 21: by Scarlett (new)

Scarlett | 62 comments Mod
All are accepted!!!!!!!!1


message 22: by Tomago (new)

Tomago First name:Kenji
Last name:kazuma
Age :5,000
Gender:male
Race:Demon
Appearance:(Japanese)

http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh...

Move of choice"relentless assult (a devastating combo useing his Duel katanas)
Weakness:Anglic runes,holy Items,Snakes
Weapons:Duel katanas
Abilities:
+ strength
+speed
+combat(hand to hand/Kempo)
+Immortal(cant die of old age)


Personality:he is very calm and kind to people even if they are not of the same faction due to his upbringing in the human world.Tenchi still belives in honor and loyalty.and your word is your bond.

Additional info/ history:Sent to eath to redem him self due to the fact he was born with a kind soul and had no place in hell tho he joined the Shadow clan (more or less because he like the name) he still makes it his personal mission to help others in need.
Flock Member-Shadow


message 23: by Scarlett (new)

Scarlett | 62 comments Mod
Accepted!!!


message 24: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 12, 2015 01:43AM) (new)

((UNDER MAIJOR CONSTRUCTION!!!))

{Identity:}

[Name:] Phoenix Ride
[Nickname:] Fifi (friends' nickname for her) Ninja Nix (Her dad's nickname for her)
[Blood Type:] O
[Star Sign:] Capricorn
[Date of Birth:] January 18
[Theme Song:] I See Fire by Ed Sheeran
[Age:]14

{Orientation}

[Gender:] Female
[Sexuality:] Heterosexual
[Relationship Status:] Single
[Crush:] *Flies away*
[Race:] American
[Species:] 96% human, 4% Avian
[Powers:] ((All inherited from Max and Fang))
*Fighting Style
Phoenix learned how to fight and defend from her mother, Max. She fights in a mixed martial arts style (which her mother calls Max Kwon Do). It helps that she and the Flock are much stronger than regular humans, so she can easily defeat most (non-mutant) grown men.

*Speed
Phoenix also has the ability to fly extremely fast, her top speed at roughly 240–250 miles per hour, or over 300 miles per hour in a fast dive.

*Breathing Underwater
Phoenix develops gills

*Other
She is able to temporarily shut down her organs, thus effectively playing dead.

*Natural Abilities Edit
Phoenix and the rest of the Flock, like birds, have a built-in sense of direction and raptor vision.

*Camouflage
Phoenix inherited her father's skill of camouflage. This skill, invisibility, complements her and her personality perfectly; she is known among the Flock for sitting quietly for such extended periods of time, such that they sometimes forget he is there.

*Immortality
It is revealed in Nevermore that Fang's DNA holds the key to immortality and as a result he is more likely to survive an incident as opposed to the other Flock members. Phoenix inherited this DNA

*Morphing
She has no clue where these powers came from, however she is known to sometimes morph her appearance. She loves morphing her blue black wings to look like butterfly wings. She can morph into only one completely different looking person only.(view spoiler)


message 25: by Audie Murphy (last edited Aug 11, 2015 10:28AM) (new)

Audie Murphy | 17 comments Name Kali
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Appearance:

Move of choice: Sneak attack
Abilities:
•Standard Bird Kid metabolism, sense of direction, ect.
•Invisibility.... Kind of. Kali is able to trick other people's minds into not seeing her, almost like a chameleon blending into the surroundings.
Weakness:
•Lack of training
•Cameras can still detect her
Personality:
•Timid at first
•Headstrong when you get to know her
History:
Kali was a test tube baby, she grew up at The School. She was tested on, mostly when she was young. As she got older they didn't test on her as much as try to evolve her powers. The problem was, they couldn't figure out what her powers were. Kali figured it out with the help of Dustin, the boy in the cage next to hers and with his help and her powers they fled. The two ended up in Oklahoma, they didn't know where they were but it seemed like the best option for a place no one would look. They survived on there own, until the erasers caught up with them. They only had orders to take Kali in alive. Dustin and Kali fought them off but Dustin was severely injured and died a few days later. Now Kali roams, occasionally bumping into other flocks but never bothering to stay.
Flock: None


message 26: by Audie Murphy (new)

Audie Murphy | 17 comments Done, I think


message 27: by ♀ѕαgιттαяιυѕ_яσѕє♀ (last edited Aug 19, 2015 03:47PM) (new)

♀ѕαgιттαяιυѕ_яσѕє♀  (SagittariusRose) | 9 comments UNDER CONSTRUCTION
Name: Julliett
Age: 16
Gender: female
Appearance: (view spoiler)
Move of choice: sword attack
Weakness: her blind side
Personality
Additional info/ history: During her stay at the School, the scientists tried to genetically enhance her eyesight in her right eye, resulting in the, having to eventually remove the right eye.
And finally choose what flock you would like to be in
~ righteous flock
~ storm flock
~ birch flock
~ breaking dawn flock
~ shadow flock


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

So far so good


message 30: by tem (last edited Aug 23, 2015 06:54PM) (new)

tem B A S I C

Name Oriana Adelpha
Age 19
Blood Type O
Place of Birth Boulder, Colorado
Zodiac Cancer
Gender Female
Sexuality Hetro
Flock Breaking Dawn Flock

*****************************************************************************

A P P E A R A N C E



Hair Mahogany
Eyes
Height 5 feet 6 Inches
Wings Oriana's wings are golden brown like a falcon. Her wings are extremely powerful and enables her to fly a lot faster than normal.
Wing Span Oriana has a 16 Feet Wingspan

*****************************************************************************

P E R S O N A L I T Y

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H I S T O R Y

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F I G H T I N G

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O T H E R


message 31: by Demon Dragon (last edited Aug 27, 2015 09:46AM) (new)

Demon Dragon (Changer of Worlds) | 6 comments First and last name: Adrian Magus
Age: 18
Gender: male
Appearance: 7ft tall with massive leathery wings, somewhat covered by hard but flexible black scales. has long blue-black hair and glowing green eyes. fingers and toes are tipped with sharp claws. has a long, but powerful, prehensile, lizardy tail.
Move of choice: tends to either bash his enemies with his tail or cut them with his claws or tear them apart with his teeth.
Weakness: eats a lot when he can, also tends drive people crazy with his sarcasm.
Personality: tends to swing from being sarcastic to completely savage. whatever DNA used to make him, its at constant war with his human personality. he enjoys helping his friends but is jumpy around most people. he a nasty habit of biting before asking questions.
Additional info/ history: he was raised in a lab, supposedly to find a cure for cancer, but in reality was to make a bio-weapon. he eventually escaped and destroyed the lab he came from. he wandered on his own for a time, searching for somebody to call friend, when he met Marcus. a mutant like him the wandered together for several years before finding a flock that let them in.
Flock (go to Flock Request): Breaking Dawn Flock


message 32: by Demon Dragon (new)

Demon Dragon (Changer of Worlds) | 6 comments is he approved?


message 33: by ♀ѕαgιттαяιυѕ_яσѕє♀ (last edited Sep 29, 2015 01:37PM) (new)

♀ѕαgιттαяιυѕ_яσѕє♀  (SagittariusRose) | 9 comments First and last name: Meridith
Age: 13
Gender: female
Appearance: short, about 4"5, long crimson hair, very thin.


Her wings are a lovely gold color, and reach a span of 15 feet when spread
Move of choice: sonic scream
Personality: Meredith is fun and playful, and as much as her size infuriates her, she loves to fly. But she never feels like she fits in, because she is in a flock of bird kids, when she is a bug kid. She is very awkward, and doesn't know what to say at times.
Additional info/ history: when she was in the school, they tried to give her butterfly wings, but could on,y enhance size so much, that the forced Merdith to be extremely small, so the wings would fit. Sadly, the wings turned out huge and Merdith turned out small.
And finally choose what flock you would like to be in:
~ birch flock


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