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The Fault in Our Stars
The Fault in Our Stars Revision
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Feb 19, 2014 05:50AM
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but for the selection. I am going to change the part when she sees aspen and does not tell mason. BC everything would have worked out so much better had she get ten rid of him in the first place!!
ok... it didn't post my comment b4 that one... ok. well I said changing the fault in our stars would make it less satisfactory
Yeah I figured I'd do a better job on Allegiant. And thank you!!! Everything will be so much better. All she had to do was say "heyyy maxon...uh so Aspen's a guard and he's hanging outside my room"
or when she saw aspen she could have pulled him aside and say "hey, you remember aspen, that guy who I loved and he broke up with me? well he is over there." the she points him out, he is reassigned, and BAM better story

