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The Fault in Our Stars Revision

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Andrea | 36 comments Mod
Okay guys....For English, I'm going to write a new ending for the fault in Our Stars. Michayla, I want to make it satisfactory enough for you. Any ideas of what I should include in my new ending?


Andrea | 36 comments Mod
Or I might do allegiant, so if you have ideas for that too...


Michayla | 42 comments but for the selection. I am going to change the part when she sees aspen and does not tell mason. BC everything would have worked out so much better had she get ten rid of him in the first place!!


Michayla | 42 comments ok... it didn't post my comment b4 that one... ok. well I said changing the fault in our stars would make it less satisfactory


Andrea | 36 comments Mod
Yeah I figured I'd do a better job on Allegiant. And thank you!!! Everything will be so much better. All she had to do was say "heyyy maxon...uh so Aspen's a guard and he's hanging outside my room"


Michayla | 42 comments or when she saw aspen she could have pulled him aside and say "hey, you remember aspen, that guy who I loved and he broke up with me? well he is over there." the she points him out, he is reassigned, and BAM better story


Andrea | 36 comments Mod
She could have done anything differently, and it would have turned out better.


Michayla | 42 comments SERIOUSLY!!! URRRR


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