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Wow. Is it just me, or isn't when you read others peoples work you feel like your own work is insignificant. Because you and Ruby's work is amazing. You really you how to draw a reader in. XP
Thank you so much! And yes I feel that way a lot, but such is the life of a perfectionist. I already find myself critiquing this! Noticing the way the narrative flow is interrupted occasionally, and some grammar things I need to correct. Unfortunately my perfectionism is dying down and I am simply too lazy to edit. But I'm glad you like it and find it engaging (literally the two best compliments a writer could ever get!)
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Hmm....I likey, likey. :) Can't wait to read more.
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Thanks guys!!!!! I appreciate you checking it out. I plan on adding more soon. ^__^
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Yeah totally get you! I do that all the time! But then someone comments, and I'm like...Well maybe I should keep going and see were this leads.But anyway I see what your saying.
I've recently started working on a book called The New Generation Project or (T.N.G.P) it's in the creative writing page on goodreads. And I'm debating on whether or not I should continue.
Ravanna wrote: "Yeah totally get you! I do that all the time! But then someone comments, and I'm like...Well maybe I should keep going and see were this leads.But anyway I see what your saying.
I've recently st..."
You should! I'll have to check it out, I don't think I've read it yet...
Love it!And yeah its new so hardly anyone has read it yet! Only two chapters so far. :/
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Ravanna wrote: "Love it!And yeah its new so hardly anyone has read it yet! Only two chapters so far. :/"
Where is it?
It's in that creative writing thing on Goodreads. Or if you just go to my page, and scroll down to Ravanna's writing, It should be either above or below Ravanna's groups. I hope that makes sense!
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And here I thought my writing was good! *Swats hand through the air* Nope. No where as good, and as descriptive as yours! You make a reader intrigued, and your details are admire worthy. You always hold my attention! Love it!
Ravanna wrote: "And here I thought my writing was good! *Swats hand through the air* Nope. No where as good, and as descriptive as yours! You make a reader intrigued, and your details are admire worthy. You always..."Nonsense. You're writing is brilliant. I'm actually still trying to work on being more descriptive so it seems less of a dialogue. HOWEVER---- I'm glad you guys are liking it so far. I don't know if you guys can see it, but it's a loosely based on a fairy tale....
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and, is it Cinderella?
Rubyfirewoods12=^.^= wrote: "First of all, YAY LOVE IT AS ALWAYSand, is it Cinderella?"
Nope.
Should I tell you? Or would that ruin it? haha!
NOTICE: Henri's name is being changed to... *drum roll* Willem.
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Haha, but I liked HENRI
...SIGH, I suppose I'll manage....
Well, I mean I guess I could still do Henri.... I'm rather fond of it. Might as well.
NOTICE: Ok. I'm switching this up so it can go better with the fairy tale version I'm basing it on--- So make sure you check to see if anything has been updated, lest it doesn't make sense.
It shouldn't be too bad, but I think it will show more character development in certain characters than there was before. (I know they tell you to write and then edit, but this would drive me crazy).
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