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The Last Stand

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Chapter one

Bam. Bam. I raced forward, trying to avoid the guns and cars. Hey, my name's Syra. I live with the dragons. And the freakos that are chasing me want to control the dragons. But they know that dragons are too fierce for them. So of course they come after me, the dragon rider. They think that by capturing me, the dragon rider, the dragons would give up. And they're right. Bam! I winced. One of the bullets grazed my shoulder. A swift look told me that the cut wasn't deep. It'll heal in a week or 2. I raced on, pelting through the trees and heading for a safe place. I could feel the soft grass turn into...pebbles? I groaned. The hunters herded me to where the dragons lived! I whipped around in time to see the hunters burst out of the bushes. They grinned and raised their guns. I smiled. "See you later." I said softly.

I whipped around to face the gorge and jumped right off the clift. There were shouts and orders from the clift edge but I didn't hear them. The only thing I heard was the whisling of the wind as a plunged 100 feet to my doom. Or so the hunters thought. I whipped out my leathery, red, dragon wings and flew down. I landed softly next to the dragon hatchlings, being careful not not step on any of their wings.

Did I mention I'm half dragon?


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

what is it called


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

Oh to let you know I am new


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

That was so cool!!


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

Really?


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

yeah! you should write more. . .


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

eh, I was waiting for my brother to stop hogging the computer


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

Siblings are annoying.


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

I know!


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

older or younger brother?


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

Older


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

mine is younger.


message 13: by [deleted user] (new)

yeah, mine is a pain in the-


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

same here


message 15: by [deleted user] (new)

yup


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

you really should write more.


message 17: by [deleted user] (new)

I know


message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

wana help me make a new rp?


message 19: by [deleted user] (new)

Sure, a new group or what?


message 20: by [deleted user] (new)

yeah.


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

kk


message 22: by [deleted user] (new)

what should we name it?


message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

It matters....what kind of RP?


message 24: by [deleted user] (new)

IDK


message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

^^


message 26: by [deleted user] (new)

:P


message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

XD


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

awesome! XD ^^


message 29: by [deleted user] (new)

Thanks!


message 30: by [deleted user] (new)

n/p


message 31: by [deleted user] (new)

^^


message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

Hai!


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