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message 1: by Mya (new)

Mya | 559 comments ((Great, I love a game but can't play it because I didn't read the book. So I'll just ask, what is the North Tower?))


message 2: by Mya (new)

Mya | 559 comments ((Oh great! Thank you!))

The old king eyes widened with the news, "What are you saying to me?" He shouted at the messenger.

The messenger repeated the message one more time,"The North Tower farted and walk up on two legs and left." He was smirking this time and he couldn't resist laughing this time, either. The North Tower wanted to joke with the king, so he told the messenger to give the old king that specific message.

((Comedy?))


message 3: by Ayaaa (new)

Ayaaa (ayaaah1899) | 1147 comments Mod
((Lol i dont understand))


message 4: by Ayaaa (last edited Mar 22, 2014 12:14AM) (new)

Ayaaa (ayaaah1899) | 1147 comments Mod
Then , suddenly someone knocked at the Door .

"Who is there ? "the king asked . He told his guards that they should go there and ask who the visitor was .

The guards went as asked by the king ,and said
"Who Dares knock at the kings door ? "


The unknown person said .
"Pizza delivery ? ...." he asked in confusion

"WAIT ?? is not here ? ohhhh~ Man !!! " it was a delivery man . =_=


message 5: by Astraeous (new)

Astraeous Javier (Adelmar) | 213 comments (( Good Luck to the both of you, if Raychylle sees this, I'm not even sure if you'll last in this world another minute.. ))


message 6: by Mya (new)

Mya | 559 comments ((Why do you say that? "Who is it?" "Pizza delivery." It's priceless! I'm Rofl on the floor. . . I might die by laughter! XD "Who is it?" "Pizza Delivery." XD LOL ))


message 7: by Ayaaa (new)

Ayaaa (ayaaah1899) | 1147 comments Mod
((Lol ,, whats wrong with that ? huh Stine ? it actually said that we can make it like a comedy or ,, ahh !! ))

((just ,, please continue the story lol its getting good !! ))


message 8: by Mya (new)

Mya | 559 comments Messenger shouted,"No, no, your at the right place!" Messenger starts rummaging through his pockets, finding nothing to pay for his pizza he order. He turned to the king and spoke,"You know I came all this way from the North Tower to give you this important message, a little thing you could do is help a man out?"

The king was going to scream at him! Until he calmed himself, and reminded himself; Don't shoot the messenger. He forced a smile, he was just about to speak until a guard pipped up,"I'll pay, if you split it with me!"

The messenger turned to the guard; shook his hand, and spoke, "Deal!"


message 9: by Astraeous (new)

Astraeous Javier (Adelmar) | 213 comments (( Raychylle's not an *it* .. Very well .. Please do ignore what I said .. ))


message 10: by Ayaaa (new)

Ayaaa (ayaaah1899) | 1147 comments Mod
((you do know i wasnt referring to raychylle it was the her sentence ,, lol ))


message 11: by Ayaaa (new)

Ayaaa (ayaaah1899) | 1147 comments Mod
The King looked at the guard pitifully , he facepalmed then spoke " Pizza ... Pizza ..."


The messager turned back at the king "Why ? whats wrong with pizza ? "

"uhmmmmmm ... " the king mumbled .

"uhmmm ? what ? " the guard asked .

They finished up paying for the pizza .They then started eating in front of the king .

"Uhmm ,, what are the toppings ? "

The messenger looked up at the king while munching on the pizza " Uhmm ,, just some cheese, ham , simesliced mushroom anddd ''' -- " he didn't finished his sentence yet--

"No ham ? " the king asked .

The guard looked at the pizza . "There is !! Here ! "

"HELL IM IN !!!!!! " the king then got off his seat then went to them and ate too .


message 12: by Astraeous (new)

Astraeous Javier (Adelmar) | 213 comments (( Then, what were you referring at? ))


message 13: by Ayaaa (new)

Ayaaa (ayaaah1899) | 1147 comments Mod
((the description !!! ugh !!))


message 14: by Mya (new)

Mya | 559 comments The Queen walked in, eyes widened with surprise as she caught the sight of a messenger, a guard, and her husband on the floor eating pizza. "Um, what are doing. . . ?"

The King looked up at his wife, and jumped to his feet. His wife, really hates him when he doesn't have manners. "Oh, just looking at something?"

"Pizza?"

"Yep, Pizza, it has ham, very interesting! Must be observed!" He told her, he glanced at the other two pleading for their help, his wife is going to kill him for this! The usual punishment for this behavior from her was two weeks scrubbing their bathroom floor! Two weeks!


message 15: by Ayaaa (new)

Ayaaa (ayaaah1899) | 1147 comments Mod
The Queen looked like she wasn't going to believe of what the king has said .The king got nervous and he suddenly pointed at them , the messenger and the guard . "THEM !!! IT WAS THEIR FAULT !! THEY TEMPTED ME !! MAYBE THEY KNOW THAT I LIKE HAM !! ITS HAM DARLING !!!HAM !! YOU KNOW I LIKE IT RIGHT ? "

The messenger snapped !!

He flips the pizza box making the pizza scattered on the floor .

"NOOOO!! My PIIIZZAAA !! " The guard was teary eyed . It was PIZZA !! for Gods Sake !!


The messenger stood and looked like he was about to punch the king ,, but other guards started to point an arrow at him .

"I am soooo not cleaning the bathroom !!! NOOOOOO!! your bathroom is big !!! " the messenger kneels in front of the queen ..

"Please dont make me clean the bathroom ,, *sniffs* "


message 16: by Mya (new)

Mya | 559 comments ((Good one!))

"Son, it's not what it looks like!" The king said, eyeing the prince and the queen, back and forth. "It's, it's, um, it's. . . ." He kicked the guard in the back to come up with some good lie.

The guard looked up, pizza in his mouth,"IT'S DELICIOUS!" Raising a pizza slice as he said it.

"Yeah, I think the king knows that! He was wolfing it down like there is no tomorrow!" The messenger told them all very loudly. The guard and the messenger laughed. The king glared down at the two. The messenger and the guard sensed it, knowing now that they gave the wrong answer.

"I mean, it's horrible!"

"The king was disgusted, he didn't even eat one bite! "


message 17: by Ayaaa (new)

Ayaaa (ayaaah1899) | 1147 comments Mod
The queen facepalmed and left .


message 18: by H :) (new)

H :) | 29 comments ((Haha, lol... This story... Rofl :D lol))


message 19: by Mya (new)

Mya | 559 comments ((Yeah. I do too! Now I think I'm going to change the mood. ))

The king awoke the day after yesterday. He had a stomach ache, he felt like he was going to hurl, but he still climbed to his throne. The king knew he had to make it up to his family somehow for eating that Pizza! But how? He was pondering the thought when the knock was heard. The king said come in. The messenger from before came inside.

The king moaned in protest, "Not you, again! What did you bring this time the North Tower is back finally! Oh, I know, I know, ice cream." The king laughed at his own wit, but the messenger was silent.

The messenger shook his head and muttered,"I wish. . ." His head was down he raised it up to look at the king. "Your brother was murdered by something, someone, we don't know yet for sure. His whole family was slaughtered, but one girl. . . We don't know what to do with her, she won't tell us anything, and it is your niece, so we decided to bring her here. . . "


message 20: by Ayaaa (new)

Ayaaa (ayaaah1899) | 1147 comments Mod
(( lol. hahhaha you really did change the mood ,, hahah ))


message 21: by Mya (new)

Mya | 559 comments ((Yes, indeed I did. I might change it again! After all, I'm a writer in the making. ))


message 22: by Ayaaa (new)

Ayaaa (ayaaah1899) | 1147 comments Mod
(Hahahah ,, lol npw since you changed it ,, i just ran out of ideas ,, lol XD!!)


message 23: by Mya (new)

Mya | 559 comments The messenger backed out of the throne room, closed the giant doors behind him. He sighed; shook his head, "She'll be safe here." He walked down the long isle, expecting to just leave. But then an arrow wheezed down beside his feet, "A miss," he said in shock. He glanced up where it came from and saw intruders. He turned immediately around, thrusted open the doors, and shouted,"Intruders! Intruders! We need to leave now!"


message 24: by Angelo (new)

Angelo Gideon | 313 comments ((Wow.. Fast-paced. ))


message 25: by Mya (new)

Mya | 559 comments ((Yeah, thank you. Sorry for the sloppy detail, though, I really didn't feel like adding any and I still don't!))


message 26: by Ayaaa (new)

Ayaaa (ayaaah1899) | 1147 comments Mod
((i dont have an idea ,, lol hahah i can't ,, put a continuation lol))


message 27: by Mya (new)

Mya | 559 comments ((Or it not being a false alarm and you, the king, must flee with the princess into the night. You go into the forest and the intruders follow you. The King sacrifices himself for the princesses's escape. . . ? ))


message 28: by Mya (new)

Mya | 559 comments ((Too soon?! Lol XD Fast Paced that's what it is called, and exciting plot twists!))


message 29: by Ayaaa (new)

Ayaaa (ayaaah1899) | 1147 comments Mod
(( okay ,, wait ,, i'll get a tissue ,,))


message 30: by Mya (new)

Mya | 559 comments ((But?))


message 31: by Ayaaa (new)

Ayaaa (ayaaah1899) | 1147 comments Mod
(( .. but ?? Lol ))


message 32: by Mya (new)

Mya | 559 comments ((No, no, now I'm way too curious, I WANT TO KNOW! Lol XD, but yeah, what? ))


message 33: by Mya (new)

Mya | 559 comments (( Okay, sure. It's not my turn anyway, it's yours, Ice, or anyone else. ))


message 34: by Ayaaa (new)

Ayaaa (ayaaah1899) | 1147 comments Mod
( i really have no ideas ,, *sigh*)


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