Strictly Reviews discussion

Hello,

I'm on the verge of self-publishing an ebook for children aged 4 to 7 years. It's a 'feel-good' story, told in rhyme, about a snail who's broken her arm and leg. There's no particular message in it, it's just a piece of entertainment for little children'. I'm really looking for someone to read it and give me HONEST feedback about the illustrations and story line and whether the rhymes are OK. It's the typical length for picture books, around 30 pages and takes around 4 minutes for an adult to read. If anyone is able to provide feedback, that would be great. If you think the story and illustrations are of a good enough quality, it would be great if you left a review on Amazon, though it may be a day or two before it's uploaded there. Many thanks.

Marisa

Marisa,

I would be happy to provide feedback.

Theresa

Oh, thank you Theresa. Do I need your email address to forward the pdf file to?

Cheers,

Marisa

Marisa wrote: "Oh, thank you Theresa. Do I need your email address to forward the pdf file to?

Cheers,

Marisa"

Yes, it is theresajones@gmail.com

Many thanks. will forward the manuscript shortly. :-)

Hi Marisa, I'd be happy to read and review, I have a four-year-old little boy who loves to read ☺

My email is sarah.elizabeth.bookworm@gmail.com