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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

Walmart. Feel free to break in.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Hannah ran to an abandoned walmart. She breaks in. The wallmart is sure were torn up and dusty. She hide in a good hiding spot where people wouldn't find her.


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

Trisha opened her eyes weakly. Who had dragged her here?


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
((wait, trisha was dragged? I thought she was still on the highway))


message 5: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan woke up. He looked at his right and saw the girl. He was aching all over. He saw a Walmart a few feet away. He grabbed his and the girls handguns and walked to the store.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Hannah's pain on her stomach making her weak and its impossible for her to run any further. She touch the her pain gently and saw that her blood is making the bandage even redder than before. She winced.


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

((Somehow they all ended up here.))

Trisha glared at them. She cursed at the boy who had disarmed her. There was nothing she could do but follow.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
((Oh. Okay. Daniel its your turn))


message 9: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan ran into the door and locked it. Ryan shouted, "HANNAH!?!? Are you here?!?!" He started to search aisle to aisle, looking for her. There was only one aisle left to look for.


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

Turns are: Daniel, Ertica, me.


message 11: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments ((Okay.))


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Hannah was afraid that he would find her.
((Hey daniel, how bout we make a plot twist where you almost find her on the last aisle but you didnt cause hannah hid on a perfect hidden spot that you could not find her))


message 13: by [deleted user] (new)

Trisha followed ryan's voice. "You have five seconds to give me back my gun," she growled in a low voice.


message 14: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments "I don't care. Take them both." Ryan was so focused on finding Hannah he forgot about the girl. He threw her both his and her guns and ran to the last aisle.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Hannah who saw Ryan getting closer on finding her hiding spot began to crawled deeper while her eyes still on Ryan.


message 16: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments ((Whose turn is it now?))


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
((Mia's turn now))


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
((Daniel, do you want to continue it while waiting for mia?))


message 19: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments ((Sure.))

Ryan was running to the last aisle so quick he tripped and broke his ankle. "Ow!" It was bleeding like crazy.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Hannah gasp and cover her mouth. He wanted to help Ryan but she got her own problem too.


message 21: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan quickly got his backpack and got out his bandages. He put one on the bleeding spot. He let it soothe for a while before trying to stand up.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
She watch as Ryan slowly bandaged his wound. He looks pretty charming when he concentrated on doing thing.


message 23: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan looked up and saw Hannah. But instead of chasing her, Ryan walked to an aisle full of Doritos and Pepsi. He got a Doritos bag, opened it, and ate some. He also chugged down a Pepsi.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Hannah's stomach began to growled. Seriously she needs food to make her strong enough to get up. But she couldn't, ryan still there.


message 25: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan looked at Hannah and said, "Go ahead, eat." He casually went up, walked to a different aisle, and ate there instead.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
" How do you find me " still hiding on her hiding spot.


message 27: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments "Didn't you think that hiding in an aisle full of gummy worms was a little too overrated?" he said, still eating. "By the way, I won't chase you anymore. You can eat now."


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Hannah let a long sigh and eventually crawled out from her hiding spot and sat beside Ryan. She takes the doritos from ryan's hand and eats it.


message 29: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan looks at Hannah's wound. "Does that still hurt?," he said.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
Hannah looked at ryan and cry. She nodded because the pain was making her weak and it was rare for her to cry.


message 31: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan suddenly stood up, got four plastic bags, and put food and drinks in them. He told Hannah, "Follow me." He then proceeded to exit.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
She wiped her tears and followed ryan.


message 33: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments It was night outside. Ryan proceeded to go to a nearby mall.


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
She follows ryan like a lost lamb.


message 35: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments Ryan turned to Hannah and said, "Should we get our injuries checked?"


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
She shakes her head. Hannah knows if they want to check for the injuries, the catcher will find her and used her powers.


message 37: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments "Okay," said Ryan. They proceeded to go to the mall.

((Reply in the mall folder.))


message 38: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments ((You post first.))


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
((okay:))


message 40: by Daniel (new)

Daniel | 371 comments ((Have you posted?))


Ertica*~She'sABookBirdy~*Castley (ertica) | 554 comments Mod
((Oh is it my turn now?))


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