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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

Lets make a story guys. But here's the catch, only one sentence at a time. Let's have some fun with this guys.
Lets see where shall we start...

There was not a cloud on this beautifully hot day.


message 2: by dave (new)

dave (thebat37) | 2448 comments Mod
the sun was high in the sky, shining bright over the park.


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A girl with pink hair was on the swings.


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dave (thebat37) | 2448 comments Mod
she was by herself, but swinging high.


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She was having the time of her life.


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dave (thebat37) | 2448 comments Mod
as she swung, enjoying the wind flowing by her cooling her off, clouds started to appear.


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

Some how the clouds looked different then normal clouds.


message 8: by dave (new)

dave (thebat37) | 2448 comments Mod
she didnt notice yet though, she was too busy enjoying the swinging.


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

On top of the clouds was a red headed boy.


message 10: by dave (new)

dave (thebat37) | 2448 comments Mod
he looked down at the empty park, empty but for one girl who was happily swinging away, oblivious to what was coming.


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

She looked innocent to him, maybe she shouldn't have to deal with this.


message 12: by dave (new)

dave (thebat37) | 2448 comments Mod
slowly the girl began to stop swinging, looking up at the dark clouds.


message 13: by [deleted user] (new)

She didn't freak out, she looked up at the boy on the clouds though.


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dave (thebat37) | 2448 comments Mod
he frowned when he saw her looking at him, knowing what was coming, he wished there was something he could do.


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The girl walked forward and jumped up toward the boy.


message 16: by dave (new)

dave (thebat37) | 2448 comments Mod
she jumped as high as she could, but it was too late.


message 17: by [deleted user] (new)

The boy had flew fast away from her, not wanting to be caught.


message 18: by dave (new)

dave (thebat37) | 2448 comments Mod
theres nothing i can do, he thought to himself, it is starting.


message 19: by [deleted user] (new)

Behind him the sky was changing rapidly to a deep dark red.


message 20: by dave (new)

dave (thebat37) | 2448 comments Mod
the sky seemed to be bleeding over the blue, the sight made the girl freeze in her tracks.


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

She was out of time, she had to find out who was behind this.


message 22: by dave (new)

dave (thebat37) | 2448 comments Mod
turning around she ran towards her home, a little house on the edge of the park.


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She ran inside and went straight to the basement


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dave (thebat37) | 2448 comments Mod
her house started to shake around her, as if the universe was having an earthquake.


message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

She quickly ran and grabbed her bag, filled with everything she needed.


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dave (thebat37) | 2448 comments Mod
the basement walls continued to shake and shiver, loud crashing noises are coming from all around.


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She ran back up the stairs just as the ceiling collapsed behind her.


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dave (thebat37) | 2448 comments Mod
the whole house is starting to collapse, she realizes something seriously big is going on and she has to get out.


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She runs for the front door and escapes narrowly, having to dive out.


message 30: by dave (new)

dave (thebat37) | 2448 comments Mod
narrowly avoiding disaster she makes it out just in time, hitting the ground hard as a gust of debris is thrown out behind her.


message 31: by [deleted user] (new)

She stood up and looked at her crushed house only for a few minutes, before running off into the sudden chaos.


message 32: by dave (new)

dave (thebat37) | 2448 comments Mod
all around her the buildings were coming down, it seemed like the whole world was falling in on itself.


message 33: by [deleted user] (new)

The Red head boy watched the girl running through the street, he wished he could help her somehow.


message 34: by dave (new)

dave (thebat37) | 2448 comments Mod
he watched her stumbling to the park, trying to get to a place nothing will fall on her.


message 35: by [deleted user] (new)

She found a clear spot in an open field and started to set up her equipment.


message 36: by dave (new)

dave (thebat37) | 2448 comments Mod
the boy in the clouds watched on as she set up, wondering what she could be up to.


message 37: by [deleted user] (new)

She set up a small seismograph on the ground, along with a long range scanner.


message 38: by dave (new)

dave (thebat37) | 2448 comments Mod
as she was getting everything tuned in the blood red sky gave a thunderous crash causing the instruments to react wildly.


message 39: by [deleted user] (new)

She started to pick up some sort of strange reading on her scanner.


message 40: by dave (new)

dave (thebat37) | 2448 comments Mod
behind her she heard a low thumping getting closer, someone is running up to her.


message 41: by [deleted user] (new)

She turned quickly around and looked to see who it was.


message 42: by dave (new)

dave (thebat37) | 2448 comments Mod
recognizing the familiar shape of her friend and neighbor, she went back to focusing on the data in front of her.


message 43: by [deleted user] (new)

Her scanner was still showing something, something big.


message 44: by dave (new)

dave (thebat37) | 2448 comments Mod
"what the hell are you doing out here?" her friend yelled.


message 45: by [deleted user] (new)

She didn't answer, she was trying to figure it out.


message 46: by dave (new)

dave (thebat37) | 2448 comments Mod
trying to figure out what exactly was going on, but her equipment wouldnt be able to help her, and the boy in the clouds knew it.


message 47: by [deleted user] (new)

She looked up at the sky seeing the boy, she had to catch him.


message 48: by dave (new)

dave (thebat37) | 2448 comments Mod
her friend followed her gaze to the sky, seeing nothing but horror.


message 49: by [deleted user] (new)

"Keep an eye on this," She tells her friend.


message 50: by dave (new)

dave (thebat37) | 2448 comments Mod
"what do you mean," she asked the girl with pink hair, "where do you think youre going?"


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