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message 1: by Katherine (new)

Katherine (jukeboxheroine) The river and area around the camp.


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

Ravenpelt ran through the terrritory "come on Silverfire!" He called


gelatin_monster | 139 comments Frostfur trotted onto the bank of the river, searching the grasses for Feverfew.


message 4: by Elric138 (new)

Elric138 (elric138-goodkitty-) "So Frostfur, why did Starclan accept Ratstar, I thought Starclan disliked evil cats." Redpaw asked.


gelatin_monster | 139 comments "I'm not sure, but if Starclan did, they're questioning it now." Frostfur responded. She was glad her apprentice felt comfortable enough to ask her such things.


message 6: by Elric138 (new)

Elric138 (elric138-goodkitty-) "I hope, but if Ratstar dies now, then evil or not, the clan would suffer from that too, I doubt Ravenpelt thinks he's ready, altough he would be a better leader." Redpaw said.


gelatin_monster | 139 comments "I agree. Ravenpelt doesn't think he's ready, but in my opinion he would make a fine leader." Frostfur stated. A few nasty feeling were getting stirred up inside her, and she didn't like it.


message 8: by Elric138 (new)

Elric138 (elric138-goodkitty-) Redpaw stopped and quickly caught a mouse. "Sorry I'm hungry." Redpaw said. Redpaw began eating. "If Ravenpelt becomes leader, who do you think he'll choose as the new deputy." Redpaw asked.


gelatin_monster | 139 comments "Maybe Silverfire, she's an excellent warrior and he fancies her." Frostfur chuckled. She sunk her claws into some moss, hoping her young apprentice couldn't see how upset she was.


message 10: by Elric138 (new)

Elric138 (elric138-goodkitty-) Redpaw was about to notice it when something else distracted him. "Hey I found the Feverfew." Redpaw said happily.


message 11: by gelatin_monster (new)

gelatin_monster | 139 comments "That's great!" Frostfur mewed, and began padding over to her apprentice. Suddenly she stopped in her tracks. She collapsed on the bank.


message 12: by Elric138 (new)

Elric138 (elric138-goodkitty-) "Frostfur, what's wrong?" Redpaw asked as he ran to her.


message 13: by gelatin_monster (new)

gelatin_monster | 139 comments Frostfur's eyes were open, but they were glazed over. Her body was totally still, her mind seemed to be somewhere else.


message 14: by Elric138 (new)

Elric138 (elric138-goodkitty-) "Is she having a vision." Redpaw thought.


message 15: by gelatin_monster (new)

gelatin_monster | 139 comments Frostfur suddenly jumped up, smacking into her apprentice. "Ow! Redpaw, how much time has passed?"


message 16: by Elric138 (new)

Elric138 (elric138-goodkitty-) "It hasn't been long." Redpaw said.


message 17: by gelatin_monster (new)

gelatin_monster | 139 comments Frostfur sat down, relieved. "Starclan has shown me something, something dangerous."


message 18: by Elric138 (new)

Elric138 (elric138-goodkitty-) "What then?" Redpaw asked nervously.


message 19: by gelatin_monster (new)

gelatin_monster | 139 comments "Shadowclan's leader is planning to overthrow Ratstar." Frostfur whispered softly. "According to the code I'm supposed to report this to Ratstar, but I can't exactly do that.


message 20: by Elric138 (new)

Elric138 (elric138-goodkitty-) "You don't want him to be prepared, you want him to die." Redpaw said. Redpaw finished his mouse.

"I bet he'll go to the dark forest." Redpaw said.


message 21: by gelatin_monster (new)

gelatin_monster | 139 comments "I know, but I will need to pray to Starclan and ask them for guidance about what to do with this information." Frostfur mewed, deep in thought.


message 22: by Elric138 (new)

Elric138 (elric138-goodkitty-) "You can go to the moonstone, I can stay in the camp in case someone needs our help." Redpaw said.


message 23: by gelatin_monster (new)

gelatin_monster | 139 comments "I will, but not tonight, Ratstar will be suspicious. You cannot share any of what I have told you tonight with anyone else, okay?"


message 24: by Elric138 (new)

Elric138 (elric138-goodkitty-) "I swear to Starclan." Redpaw said.

"But do you know when he'll attack, do you even know if Ratstar will be the only victim." Redpaw asked.


message 25: by gelatin_monster (new)

gelatin_monster | 139 comments "Even he doesn't know exactly when he will attack, but Ratstar is intended to be the only victim as far as I can tell." Frostfur replied.


message 26: by Elric138 (new)

Elric138 (elric138-goodkitty-) "Let's hope that stays that way." Redpaw said.


message 27: by gelatin_monster (new)

gelatin_monster | 139 comments "I agree. We should get back to camp, it's getting late." Frostfur mewed.


message 28: by Elric138 (new)

Elric138 (elric138-goodkitty-) "Yeah, we better go." Redpaw said as he took half of the Feverfew in his mouth to carry it.


message 29: by gelatin_monster (new)

gelatin_monster | 139 comments Frostfur nodded then grabbed the other half of Feverfew and made her way back into camp, still thinking about her vision.


message 30: by Elric138 (new)

Elric138 (elric138-goodkitty-) ((camp clearing?))


message 31: by gelatin_monster (new)

gelatin_monster | 139 comments ((okeeeee, can you post first?))


message 32: by Elric138 (new)

Elric138 (elric138-goodkitty-) "Are you coming Ivypaw?" Nightshadow asked.


message 33: by [deleted user] (new)

Ivypaw followed Nightshadow.


message 34: by Elric138 (new)

Elric138 (elric138-goodkitty-) "So Nightshadow, how are things coming along in Riverclan." Badgerfur asked.

"Not that well, especially not now that Nightfur is planning to betray Riverclan to Shadowclan." Nightshadow said, both he and Badgerfur talked as if Ivypaw wasn't there.


message 35: by Katherine (new)

Katherine (jukeboxheroine) ((Is he lying?))


message 36: by Elric138 (new)

Elric138 (elric138-goodkitty-) ((Yes))


message 37: by [deleted user] (last edited Nov 29, 2015 05:34PM) (new)

Ivypaw's eyes widened "He is??" She asked.


message 38: by Elric138 (new)

Elric138 (elric138-goodkitty-) "Yes, I've seen him talking to Ravenstar multiple times, and an shadowclan apprentice accidently said it to me." Nightshadow said.

"Sounds like a big problem, what will they do?" Badgerfur asked.


message 39: by [deleted user] (new)

"Wow! Night fur must be stopped!" Ivypaw exclaimed


message 40: by Elric138 (new)

Elric138 (elric138-goodkitty-) "No, not yet." Nightshadow said.


message 41: by [deleted user] (new)

Ivypaw sighed. "When?" She asked.


message 42: by Elric138 (new)

Elric138 (elric138-goodkitty-) "They said they will try to attack during the gathering, that's when we'll punish Nightfur." Nightshadow said.

"So they're trying to kill someone during a gathering, that's 2 important rules of the warrior code broken right there." Badgerfur said.


message 43: by [deleted user] (new)

"Wow...they are evil cats." Ivypaw exclaimed. "I.....have something to confess.......when I go to sleep every night a cat comes and helps me be a better warrior. He teaches me battle moves. Is that a bad thing?" She asked.


message 44: by Elric138 (new)

Elric138 (elric138-goodkitty-) "Depends on how you use that training." Nightshadow said.


message 45: by [deleted user] (new)

"Oh... Ok." Ivypaw said. "A lot of cats don't like you guys.....but you're actually the good guys. I heard Ravenstar, Creekstar, and Bramblestar........" Her voice trailed off.


message 46: by Katherine (last edited Nov 29, 2015 08:54PM) (new)

Katherine (jukeboxheroine) ((NO NO NO DON'T TELL THEM SHE SHOULDN'T KNOW ANYWAY DO NOT TELL THEM NO NO NO))


message 47: by [deleted user] (new)

((She won't))


message 48: by [deleted user] (new)

((Yeeeesh))


message 49: by Elric138 (new)

Elric138 (elric138-goodkitty-) "It doesn't really matter how cats think about someone, the way you feel about a cat should be because of his actions, not because everyone else has that feeling." Nightshadow said.

Badgerfur caught a rabbit. "Has the clan already been fed." Badgerfur asked.


message 50: by Katherine (new)

Katherine (jukeboxheroine) ((Sorry that would have ruined the plot. Sorry. *breathes heavily*))


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