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Free YA Action/Adventure tale, LOOT til 4/21/2016
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Thats sounds cool id love to read it!
Awesome..just need your email address! Chris
I'll read it.punk_rock_princess_xx25xx@yahoo.com
The story had good detail, but I feel that there could be a bit more. A lot of the sentences were kind of the same length. You did a really good job at describing the physical aspects of your characters, but I wish that I could learn about them on a more personal level. Over all the story was good though.
Thanks for Reading it GP. I appreciate you taking the time and for your honest comments.
I would like to share my YA coming of age tale with you all.
If you would like a Free Copy (gifted from Amazon, or PDF) just reply to this post.
Loot is a nice short read great for the Fall1
Chris