Warriors: The Second Beginning {A Semi-Advanced Roleplay} discussion

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✧ [Kit name]
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✧ [Warrior/deputy/queen/elder name/medicine cat name]
✧ [Leader name {for leader only!}

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<.b>ʀaɴĸ:<./b> [Please list all the ranks of your cat, though you only need at least kit, apprentice and warrior. If you're a medicine cat, please use at lease kit medicine cat apprentice and medicine cat.]
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Flowerheart

29 moons

She-cat

Rockclan

Medicine Cat

No Apprentices

Lionbramble

She's sweet and kind, and she Is calm, she always knows how to solve problems.

Description: Grey cat, green eyes, a dark grey stripes. http://i43.tinypic.com/28lapg0.jpg Like that.

Crush: None

Kits: She's too busy for them

Family: Mother: deceased
Father: Lionbramble
Sister: Violetfur~rogue

Other: She loves healing cats, and she hoards her herbs. Her favorite kind of food is hunted mice.

Wetnose

Wetkit/wetpaw/wetnose

Age 60 moons

Gender tom

Clan Rockclan

Rank Medicine Cat

Current apprentice (Open)

Former Mentor Frogsquirt

Personality grumpy tired doesn't like kits

Description grey with a white muzzle and clear eyes

Pic http://media-cache-ec0.pinimg.com/600...

Mate none

Kits none

Family

Mother Shrewsplash

Father Mixedstripe

Brother Reedspring

Other none

Fellow medicine cat!

Med cats aren't allowed to have kits/mates. It would distract them.

I know that I didn't say I was looking for a mate but if forgot to pull it out

Okay! Just makin' sure!

{Name} Echokit, Echopaw, Echoleaf, Echostar
{Gender} she-cat
{Age} 45 moons
{Clan} Rockclan
{Rank} Leader

{Current Apprentice} open
{Trained Apprentices}
-Ravenspring- she-cat
-Lightfang- she-cat
-Berrycloud- tom
{Former Mentor} Sagemist

{Appearance} Echostar is a ginger, black, and grayish cat. Her face is split down the middle and on one side is black with a green eye. While the other is ginger with a blue eye. She is average in size, but has a dominating/powerful affect to her.
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{Personality} Echostar is strict, but fair, she has a big heart and is very generous. She has a soft spot for kits and wishes she could have a litter of her own. She is very protective and loyal to her clan. Even though she is caring, just, and generally kind, she gets very aggressive with rogues/loners. She prefers not to cause violence and bloodshed, but will if it's the only way to protect her clan.

{Crush/Mate} open
{Kits} none
{Family}
Maplewind- mother
Patchclaw- father
Amberfeather- sister
Bramblescar- brother
Ashpetal- sister

{Others}

Beautiful! Approved! Also, I'm loving the personality! I was thinking about making RC a more peaceful Clan, so this works well.

Thanks ^.^

: )

Fireclaw

(Do not delete this comment.)

Ah. OK.

Can I adopt shellfur

Yeah, I think so. Please create her/him profile before starting to role-play the cat.

And also make sure your cats' profile is approved before role-play, too.

Warriors:
Name: Shellfur
Age: 28Moons
Gender: Tom
Rank: Loner
Trained apprentice: none
Personality: fierce some, viscous, works alone,
Description: white fur, brown and blue wyes
Mate/crush: none
Kits: none
Family: dead brother in another clan
Other: Steals from clans,

Wait, if he's a Clan cat, why is he a loner and steals from the Clans when he's in a Clan. O-o

Okay, Here's how I think it should be.

Name:
Shellfur

Age:
28 moons

Gender:
Tom

Rank:
Warrior

Trained Apprentices:
N/A

Personality:
In my opinion, preferring to work alone is okay, but he shouldn't be too vicious.
Shellfur is fierce, and sometimes vicious. He is a bit of a loner, because he has a preference to working alone. Also, try to build on the Personality section. It should be at least 4 complete sentences. I'm trying to improve the standards on this group.

Description:
I would prefer if you used the word Appearance rather than Description. Please use at least one embedded photo and make the Appearance at least three sentences.
He has white fur, and he is odd-eyed. I don't know which eye is which color, so make that clear.

Mate/Crush
N/A

Kits:
N/A

Family:
Clan cats say Kin, not Family. Please change that. And, could you please provide the names of his kin? That would help greatly.

Other
He is a Clan cat. Unless he breaks the Warrior Code, no stealing.

I'm really sorry about this, it's like this is the one time I'm not being a pushover and trying to improve the cats!

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ɴaмɘ:
✧ Snowkit [kit name]
✧ Snowpaw [apprentice name]
✧ Snowspots [Warrior name]

aɢɘ:
✧ 26 moons
✧ 2 years, 2 months

ɢɘɴdɘʀ:
✧ Tom

cʟaɴ:
✧ RockClan

ʀaɴĸ:
✧ Kit
✧ Apprentice
✧ Warrior
✧ Elder

cuʀʀɘɴт appʀɘɴтɪcɘ:
✧ N/A

тʀaɪɴɘd appʀɘɴтɪcɘƨ:
✧ N/A

ғoʀмɘʀ мɘɴтoʀ:
✧ Darklight [Tom; alive; warrior; StormClan; 68 Moons]

pɘʀƨoɴaʟɪтʏ:
✧ Snowspots is kind toward kits, while he is heartless toward everyone else.
✧ He hates everyone he meets and doesn't even care if they are elders.
✧ He is heartless, a monster and a killer.
✧ He'll kill anyone.
✧ Apprentices, warriors, medicine cats and their apprentices, even deputies and leaders!
✧ Though, he'll never even set a claw on kits.
✧ He loves them too much.
✧ e hides his dream of killing his brother, tho' he has no reason for wanting to kill him at all.
✧ Or is there?
✧ That's a question no one will ever know.
✧ Not even StarClan, nor the Dark Forest, knows an explanation to his desire to kill his brother.
✧ Also, when Snowspots finally dies, he shall go to the Dark Forest.

dɘƨcʀıpтɪoɴ:
✧ Handsome pure black tom with pure white spots that look like snow, hence the name.
✧ Even though he's small, he has huge, powerful shoulders and, oddly enough, he is one of the strongest warriors of the Clan.
✧ He has a long scar going down his chest, for there was a fox attack when he was an apprentice.
✧ His eyes are gold and sometimes the glow in the dark.

<.b>pɪcтuʀɘƨ:<./b>
✧ Fur/Pelt, Eyes, Size:


мaтɘ/cʀuƨн: [can only have 1]
✧ Crush: N/A [open]
✧ Mate: N/A [open]

ĸɪтƨ:
✧ N/A

ғaмɪʟʏ(вʟood):
✧ Blackstar [Brother]
✧ Rose [Sister]
✧ Moonfire [Mother]
✧ Leaf-flame [Father]
✧ Hollylight [Grand-mother; Moonfire's mother]
✧ Darkpelt [Grand-father; Moonfire's father]
✧ Blackflame [Grand-father; Leaf-flame's father]
✧ Light-tail [Grand-mother; Leaf-flame's mother]
✧ Lionstar [Great-grand-father; Moonfire's grand-father]
✧ Great-grand-mother is unknown [Moonfire's mother]
✧ Dustfur [Uncle; Moonfire's brother]

ғaмɪʟʏ(Iɴ-Lawƨ):
✧ Silvermist [Blackstar's mate]
✧ Lilyfrost [Silvermist's sister
✧ Jayscar [Lilyfrost's mate]

<.b>нɪƨтoʀʏ:<./b> Snowkit had hated his brother, Black-kit since he[Black-kit] saved their sister, Shiningkit. He got very jealous and as soon as Black-kit sat down in the Medicien Cat's Den, Snowkit attacked him. Not only had he saved their little sister, he always got their mother and fathers' attention and acted like he was a leader. Everything Black-kit did made Snowkit loose his temper, and when did, he took his brother behind the Nursery and attacked him again and again.

oтнɘʀ:
✧ Wants to kill his brother

OMSC you're bringing over Snowspots!

Well, I had too! ^.^ He's in Blackclawstar's profile!

hmm...

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© Hawkfrost

|| இ|| {Name} || இ ||
Icemist

|| இ || {Age} || இ ||
17 moons
1 years and 5 months

|| இ || {Gender} || இ ||
She-cat

|| இ || {Clan} || இ ||
RockClan

|| இ || {Rank} || இ ||
Warrior

|| இ || {Current Apprentice} || இ ||
I don't know her yet, so I will not let her have one yet.

|| இ || {Trained Apprentices} || இ ||
None yet

|| இ || {Former Mentor} || இ ||
Darkstorm~Tom~Alive~RockClan~Open

|| இ || {Personaltiy} || இ ||
Icemist is a stubborn cat. She will not do what she is told to do, unless it is from her leader. Sometimes she'll completely ignore you, but she truly is a kind and loving cat. You're just not close enough to see it. She is one of the strongest cats in the Clan and she seems worship Jayscar of EarthClan. She is trust worth, very loyal and a bit of a tomboy.

|| இ || {Description} || இ ||
Icemist is a pale grey she-cat with stunning blue eyes. Like Jayscar, she has large, stone hard shoulders and most of the time she is unbeatable in battle. Her claws are deadly and she can become as dangerous badgers. She has beautiful, soft fur and she is a gorgeous young she-cat.

|| இ || {Picture} || இ ||
In description

|| இ || {Mate/Crush} || இ ||
Open

|| இ || {Kits} || இ ||
None

|| இ || {Family: Blood} || இ ||
Shiningsnow~Mother~Alive~RockClan~Open
Frozenfire~Father~Alive~RockClan~Open
Stormheart~Half-brother~Alive~RockClan~Hawkfrost
Greytail~Half-brother~Alive~RockClan~Open, ask first

|| இ || {Family: In-laws} || இ ||
None

|| இ || {History} || இ ||
Icekit was born on beautiful day in leaf-bare. After a few minutes of being born, she had almost died because a piece of ice had nearly fallen on her. Shiningsnow started to think of the name 'Icekit' because of what had happened. It fit her, of course. At her first Gathering, she saw an apprentice from StormClan. She couldn't stop staring at him and found out that his name was Jaypaw. While she was watching him, she started to notice a look on his face...kinda like he was already in love. Icepaw let her head droop sadly, but she couldn't just let go. She knew she could always be a follower. Over the next few moons, she did become a follower. She tried her best to match Jayscar's(He just because a warrior by now) appearance and she got success. When she became a warrior, she got the name 'Icemist'. She loved that name and started to leave Jayscar alone. But not completely. She still worships him for some odd reason.

|| இ || {Other} || இ ||
Nope. Nothing else.

Flintclaw Profile:

Name: Flintclaw

Gender: Tom

Age: 30 moons

Rank: Warrior

Appearance:
Flintclaw is a purebred Somali. He has a long silk pelt that has a surprisingly smooth look to it. His tail fans out the most and looks almost like a feather. He has a steel grey pelt, that gave him his name Flintkit. Along his spine he was a dark grey almost black stripe, which starts on the top of his head and runs along his spine to expand around his tail. Flintclaw has a light silvery chest and underbelly. To match his pelt, Flintclaw has tannish grey eyes.


Personality:
Flintclaw is a stubborn and hardheaded tom who absolutely adores his mate. He has a good heart and loves to hunt and protect his clan. He is ashamed of himself for hating Quail-light when they were younger and does absolutely everything he can for her. Flintclaw is terrified to think what might happen to Quail-light he wasn't there for her at the moment. The loss of their kits have hit them both hard, but she seemed to get the pain worse. He is trying everything he can to try and make her happy again and wishes that he could help her some how. He feels useless at the moment and wishes he could help her.

Kin:
Mistcloud
• mother • 25 moons • (view spoiler)[
(hide spoiler)] • deceased
Rookflight
• father • 63 moons • (view spoiler)[
(hide spoiler)] • open for creation
Fawnkit
• sister • 2 moons • deceased

Mate:
Quail-light
• 26 moons • (view spoiler)[
(hide spoiler)] • mine
Kits:
His mate gave birth to a litter of three recently, but all three were stillborn. Though despite never living a second of their lives, they still named them.
• Mallowkit • daughter • deceased
• Rowankit • son • deceased
• Rainkit • son • deceased

History:
Flintclaw was born to Mistcloud and Rookflight, both of whom are purebred Somali's. After the kitting though Mistcloud wasn't doing to good and neither was his sister Fawnkit. After two long and tedious moons, both she-cats died in their sleep. Flintkit was weaned more abruptly than most and it took a toll on him as well. After a couple moons though things turned around for the better.

Once Flintpaw became an apprentice he trained long and hard to be a great warrior. He excelled in hunting and was getting the hang of fighting fairly easy. Almost two moons before his warrior ceremony he started to train with Quailpaw. And he hated every second of it in the beginning.

The young cats despised each other, but that was only because of Quailpaw's tail. Flintpaw was unable to do the normal attacks on her and she tended to win more often than not.

However soon enough Flintpaw became Flintclaw and left Quailpaw to train by herself again. He had it easy as a warrior. Nothing to drastic to worry about, then Quailpaw finally joined him in the warriors' den.

By now Flintclaw and Quail-light were on better terms. In fact they became good friends and started hunting together on a regular basis. It was no surprise to most when they officially became mates.

Almost six moons after they became mates they found out that Quail-light was expecting. Overjoyed, Flintclaw became the overbearing mate who wouldn't let her do anything. Then she began kitting only something wasn't right. Quail-light was having difficulties and apparently so were the kits. After almost taking up half of the day the three kits were born, all stillborns. That kitting also left Quail-light in a bad shape both mentally and physically.

Saddened by their loss Flintclaw stayed with his mate and tried to make her smile, but he didn't blame her for never even trying. He tries to stay with her most of the time now afraid that she might get hurt or worse. When he does go out it is after she goes to sleep and is for short periods of time only.

Other:
• He is trying to cheer his grief-stricken mate up, but nothing seems to work.

• He hardly ever leaves her by herself anymore.

Name: Quail-light

Gender: Female

Age: 26 moons

Rank: Queen/Warrior

Appearance:
Quail-light is a purebred short haired Manx. She has a light brown pelt with tabby markings. She has a coat with a dense, soft, under layer and a longer, coarse outer layer with guard hairs. The overall appearance of the coat is fine, short and lying close to her body. Unlike most cats though she does not have a tail, in fact she doesn't even have a small stub in place of her tail.


Personality:
Quail-light has always had a sweet lighthearted spirit. She is a strategic fighter, but a carefree soul who loves to have fun. She absolutely adores kits and was ecstatic when she found out she was pregnant. However, lately she has gone between stoic and being depressed. She stopped talking to everyone altogether, with the exception of her mate. Though no can blame her, but in her case it doesn't seem like she'll ever get over the loss of her kits.

Kin:
Swanfeather
• mother • 52 moons • (view spoiler)[
(hide spoiler)] • open for creation
Swiftwing
• father • 39 moons • (view spoiler)[
(hide spoiler)] • deceased
Talloak
• brother • 26 moons • (view spoiler)[
(hide spoiler)] • open for creation
Mate:
Flintclaw
• 30 moons • mine
Kits:
She gave birth to a litter of three recently, but all three were stillborn. Though despite never living a second of their lives, she still named them.
• Mallowkit • daughter • deceased
• Rowankit • son • deceased
• Rainkit • son • deceased

History:
Quail-light was born in RockClan to Swanfeather and Swiftwing. Both of whom where purebred manx's. Quail-light and her brother grew up close to each other. They never really played with any of the other kits, but that was mainly because of their tail. The absence of them made most of the other kits uncomfortable, but they didn't care, they were carefree and still played with each other.

Once the siblings became apprentices they drifted apart like most do. In fact most of the time they didn't even train together. Somehow Quailpaw managed to train with the older apprentices. One in particular did she train with a lot, Flintpaw. The young cats despised each other, but that was only because of Quailpaw's tail. During battle training, she tended to show Flintpaw up because she didn't have her tail as a weakness unlike most cats.

However soon enough Flintpaw became Flintclaw and left Quailpaw to train by herself again. Once it began time for her warrior ceremony she was happy, but not ecstatic like many others. Quailpaw became Quail-light, for her lightheartedness and her agility and speed in battle.

By now Flintclaw and Quail-light were on better terms. In fact they became good friends and started hunting together on a regular basis. It was no surprise to most when they officially became mates.

Almost six moons after they became mates they found out that Quail-light was expecting. Overjoyed, Flintclaw became the overbearing mate who wouldn't let her do anything. Then she began kitting only something wasn't right. No, Quail-light was having difficulties and apparently so were the kits. After almost taking up half of the day the three kits were born m, all stillborns. That kitting also left Quail-light in a bad shape both mentally and physically.

She hasn't spoken to a single soul except for her mate since the kitting. She has also been ordered to stay in camp until she fully heals from the kitting. It seems like the light just went out off Quail-light and evaporated.

Other:
• She still has milk from her recent kitting though she has no kits to feed.
• She refuses to talk to anyone besides her mate at the moment, still devastated at the lost of her kits.

Um....her clan would be RockClan not FireClan

Oops. Sorry! I will change that!

Also she needs a history and there's a sentence requirement for the appearance and personality >~<

dang.

Yeah.

Kʌʅєɣ [ Yơυɾ ɱʌʛɪƈ ɯɦɪƭє ɾʌƅƅɪƭ ɦʌƨ ʅєƒƭ ɪƭ'ƨ ɯɾɪƭɪɲʛ ơɲ ƭɦє ɯʌʅʅ. ] wrote: "Name: Quail-light

Gender: Female

Age: 26 moons

Rank: Queen/Warrior

Appearance:
Quail-light is a purebred short haired Manx. She has a light brown pelt with tabby markings. She has a coat with..."

Completely tailless Manx cats are called Rumpies. Isn't that adorable??

Kʌʅєɣ [ Yơυɾ ɱʌʛɪƈ ɯɦɪƭє ɾʌƅƅɪƭ ɦʌƨ ʅєƒƭ ɪƭ'ƨ ɯɾɪƭɪɲʛ ơɲ ƭɦє ɯʌʅʅ. ] wrote: "Name: Quail-light

Gender: Female

Age: 26 moons

Rank: Queen/Warrior

Appearance:
Quail-light is a purebred short haired Manx. She has a light brown pelt with tabby markings. She has a coat with..."

Also, because I'm horrible I don't know if anyone approved this, but approved!

Aw thanks babe. Good to have you back and that is adorable.

And it's good to be back! I missed everyone! <3<3<3<3<3<3 Ones with small knobs for tails are called "Stumpies!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Manxes with longer tails are Longies!

XD

CATSSSS!!!!!

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• • Kit • •
Stormkit

• • Apprentice • •
Stormpaw

• • Warrior • •
Stormheart

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• • Age : Moons • •
20 moons

• • Age : Years • •
1 year and 8 months

• • Birthday • •
November 3, 2013

• • Gender • •
Tom

• • Relationship • •
Mate: Crush first
Crush: Will be Skydust (view spoiler)[ Alive / RockClan / Warrior / Kaley (hide spoiler)]

• • Kits • •
Secretly hopes to have them one day

• • Family : Blood • •
Father: Frozenfire (view spoiler)[ Alive / RockClan / Warrior / Open, ask first (hide spoiler)]
Mother: Blossomlight (view spoiler)[ Dead / StarClan, formerly RockClan / Queen / Open, ask first (hide spoiler)]
Brother: Greytail (view spoiler)[ Alive / RockClan / Warrior / Open, ask first (hide spoiler)]
Step-mother: Shiningsnow (view spoiler)[ Alive / RockClan / Warrior / Open, ask first (hide spoiler)]
Half-sister: Icemist (view spoiler)[ Alive / RockClan / Warrior / Open, ask first (hide spoiler)]

• • Family : In-laws • •
None

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• • Clan • •
RockClan

• • Rank • •
Kit / Appreantice / Warrior

• • Current Apprentice • •
Too young to have one

• • Trained Apprentices • •
→ Too young to have one

• • Former Mentor • •
Open, ask first

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• • The Monster • •
"I am Stormheart, and I am your worst nightmare," ~Stormheart

When Stormheart kills one cat, he need to kill another until he feels like he's had enough blood on his paws for the moment. Surprisingly his desire can be fulfilled for many moons...unless you've gotten on his bad side... He doesn't take well to orders, and he'll never leave the Dark Forest...even if he finds his special she-cat. He's a very patient killer, depending on his mood. If he's in a bad mood, he can wait for a few hours, but if he waits too long, he'll do a sloppy kill, which he hates most. He is a perfectionist with everything.

• • Perfection is Everything • •
"Back away from the mess!" ~Stormheart

Stormheart is a perfectionist, and everyone knows it. He'll probably barge into the Medicine Den to fix something that seems out of place, which normally annoys the medicine cats. This has been going on since he was a kit. Once he became an apprentice, everyone knew it was just easier to let him do his thing instead of arguing with him. This is why he is the best at fixing Dens. Even the smallest mistake will make him wail in horror. He is a clean hunter and fighter, and is always happy to help keep things under control. If you really wanna annoy him, mess up the fresh-kill pile, his own nest, and the Medicine Cat's Den. There's a certain pitch in his wail that lets you know not to panic. He had only found a mistake.

• • The Sensitive Romantic • •
"You said you can give me whatever I want. I want to be loved!" ~Stormheart

Now this side is a well hidden part of Stormheart. Even though he's a ruthless killer, he has a big heart that is easy to break. He may seem tough, but he's actually very fragile. He hides it and basically protects it with his life. He is a very romantic tom who'll put his special she-cat on a pedestal. She'd be the center of his universe, but there's a warning: he is possessive and overly protective. If you talk to a different tom for too long, he'll demand to know what you said to the other tom. He is extremely jealous and will kill anyone who tries to take his she-cat away from him. The perfect she-cat for him would be someone who'd depend on him completely and is equally jealous.

• • The Outside • •
"No one truly knows me," ~Stormheart

Everyone in the Clan thinks they know the perfection-loving Clanmate, but they really don't. To them, he is a very trust worthy cat and someone you can depend on to not tell anyone your secrets. If you tell him your deepest, darkest secret, he'll definitely try to find a way to use it against you. To his Clanmates, his loyalty to his Clan is undying when there really isn't any loyalty at all. His Clanmates think they can trust their lives with him, when he's actually a killer. He is one of the most secretive cats in the Clan, and no one even notices it. To him, all his Clanmates are true idiots.

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• • Description • •
Stormheart is a tall, handsome grey tabby tom with ice-blue eyes. He has very muscular body and broad, powerful shoulders. You'll see him constantly washing himself, but that's normal for him. He doesn't care about his appearance or anything, he just can't stand a messy pelt. Actually, he can't stand his appearance. If you make even the smallest positive comment about his appearance, he'll suddenly look insecure and will probably stay away from you for the rest of the day. He's not a fan of leaning over to do some things, but his height helps him get to the higher areas that need to be perfected.

• • Other : Pictures • •
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• • History • •
Stormkit was the exact opposite of his brother, Greykit. While Greykit was messy and loud, Stormkit was clean and quite. They loved playing together, even if it meant getting dirty, but Stormkit liked to complain about it after they had finished playing. Every night before they went to sleep, he made the nest, made sure his mothers' fur was clean and especially Greykit. He didn't care how much his mother complained about him taking so long, he needed everything to be perfect. He constantly made everything around him look perfect in his eyes, even if it'd takes days to complete. He often helped in the Medicine Den when he spotted a herb out of place. He knew nothing of herbs, but he could just sense that a herb was in the wrong place and he rushed inside to put it back into its' proper place. When he became Stormpaw, everyone knew to back off when he was in perfectionist mode. One small incorrect detail threw him off. There's a certain pitch in his wail that tells everyone to not panic: he had only found something that was incorrect in his eyes. Every time a cat ask him when he was so restless at Gatherings annoyed him. He simply said, "My Clan doesn't understand true organization,"
He had been a few moons into his apprenticeship when he was taken in by the Dark Forest. He killed his first cat during his night training in his dreams. It didn't scare him or make him feel guilty. He enjoyed it...and of course, he made it a clean kill. He vowed to never make a messy kill unless he lost his patience. (It rarely happens, though.)
After he got his warrior name, he went completely crazy at the sight of most the other cats' nests. The warriors had always kept him out of the Warrior's Den, and now he knew why. It was a rough quart moon for him, fixing the Warrior's Den, though luckily his Denmates knew not to interrupt him. They knew he was dedicated to keeping everything perfect in his eyes. Not even RockClan's leader could stop him. Even the fresh-kill pile had to be stacked a certain way.
Now he has control of his hunger for blood. Every few moons he secretly headed out of Camp and killed a few cats and, sadly enough, there is at least one sloppy kill every year and in the same season: green-leaf. He is currently searching for his special she-cat, but no one has seemed to show his requirements. He never mentions he's looking for a mate because he knew if he did, his fragile heart would probably be shattered into millions of pieces. He often watches kits lovingly, though very few bother noticing.

• • Other : Main • •
→ Appearance picture found by Kaley
→ He's definitely not your normal killer
→ Everyone knows better than to argue with Stormheart about perfectionism

• • Other : Likes • •
→ Perfection
→ Being in control
→ Kits
→ Death

• • Other : Dislikes • •
→ Messiness
→ Being ordered around
→ The fact that some cats make him clean up for them

• • Other : Fears • •
→ Never finding a mate
→ Never having kits
→ Getting his heart broken

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......oh my gosh I absolutely love him. I was trying figure out what I wanted my cats history to be and after reading this work of perfection I know exactly what I'm going to do. And you used the picture I found ^^

Yayz! (And yurp! How could I not? It gave me thirty-three awesome sentences of personality!)

Dɪsᴄʟᴀɪᴍᴇʀ (view spoiler)[
Tʜɪs ᴄʜᴀʀᴀᴄᴛᴇʀ ᴀɴᴅ ᴛᴇᴍᴘʟᴀᴛᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ғᴜʟʟʏ ᴄᴏᴘʏʀɪɢʜᴛᴇᴅ ʙʏ Kᴀʟᴇʏ. Eᴠᴇʀʏᴛʜɪɴɢ ғʀᴏᴍ ᴛʜᴇ ɢɪғs ᴛᴏ ᴛʜᴇ ғᴏʀᴍᴀᴛ, ᴇᴠᴇɴ ᴛʜᴇ ᴘɪᴄᴛᴜʀᴇs ʙᴇʟᴏɴɢ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇʀ. Iғ ʏᴏᴜ ᴡᴏᴜʟᴅ ʟɪᴋᴇ ᴛᴏ ᴜsᴇ ᴛʜᴇ ᴘɪᴄᴛᴜʀᴇs, ɢɪғs ᴀɴᴅ/ᴏʀ ᴛʜᴇ ᴛᴇᴍᴘʟᴀᴛᴇ ᴘʟᴇᴀsᴇ ᴀsᴋ ᴠɪᴀ ᴘᴍ. Iғ ᴀɴʏᴛʜɪɴɢ ɪs ᴛᴀᴋᴇɴ ᴡɪᴛʜᴏᴜᴛ ᴘᴇʀᴍɪssɪᴏɴ ᴛʜᴀᴛ ɪs ᴀ ᴠɪᴏʟᴀᴛɪᴏɴ ᴛᴏ ᴛʜᴇ Cᴏᴘʏʀɪɢʜᴛ Lᴀᴡ ᴀɴᴅ I ᴡɪʟʟ ʀᴇᴘᴏʀᴛ ʏᴏᴜ. Tʜᴀɴᴋ ʏᴏᴜ ғᴏʀ ᴀᴅʜᴇʀɪɴɢ ᴛᴏ ᴛʜɪs ᴍᴇssᴀɢᴇ. (hide spoiler)]

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❝There's always a second choice.❞

▐║⟨ B A S I C S ⟩║▌

⊱ Name ⊰ Skydust ⊱ Nickname ⊰ Sky
⊱ Age ⊰ Nineteen Moons ⊱ Gender ⊰ Female
⊱ Clan ⊰ RockClan ⊱ Rank ⊰ Warrior

▐║⟨ A P P E A R A N C E ⟩║▌

Skydust is a small shorthair she-cat. Ever since she was always small, but she is quick on her paws which makes up for her size. She is a dove grey tabby with light grey paws and a lighter muzzle. She has slender limbs and slightly larger, pointier ears. Her nose is a dirty pink also. She has a large eyes that are a golden amber color. She has soft fur and only one visible scar on her hind leg from the incident.

▐║⟨ P E R S O N A L I T Y ⟩║▌

▐║⟨ Fiery ✦ Quiet ✦ Stubborn ✦ Protective ⟩║▌

Skydust has always had a fiery spirit. She seems to always have some smart remark to say, but eventually this bad attitude subsided, which was a relief for the entire clan. However, after the incident she became quieter. Not as in shy, but more as in antisocial. She prefers to keep herself, though Skydust is generally nice if you're able to get her involved in a conversation that doesn't have to do with the clan or other clans. She can be very stubborn and headstrong at times. She typically is a soft spoken she-cat, but is very protective over her clanmates.

Skydust is an excellent warrior and hunter, but she has grown hard after the incident. She doesn't take much nonsense from anyone. She snaps without reason or warning, but still has a soft spot for kits, though she has never thought about having any of her own. She wants a mate, but every time she gets close to a tom, she remembers what happened and retreats immediately, leaving herself by herself, a sad lonely she-cat with a hard exterior to hide the truth underneath it all.

▐║⟨ H I S T O R Y ⟩║▌

Skydust was born at night. She had a brother and sister, both healthy kits. She was the last born and the weakest of the litter. She wasn't even expected to survive the night, but her father said she was a fighter and he was right. As soon as she was able to walk she was getting into trouble and leading her siblings and some of the other kits also. She had a quick tongue and a fiery spirit then. She was unyielding and was always causing mischief. She was in the nursery at the same time as Stormheart. While he was always making everything perfect, she did the exact opposite.

Unlike the rest of her clanmates, Skydust never let Stormheart touch a thing on her nest or her. She almost enjoyed watching him freak out. As she became an apprentice she trained hard and her mentor shaped her into a fine warrior. She was ten moons and almost ready to become a warrior. Her and her family decided to go out together. The had been hunting when they were attacked. Skydust had been knocked unconscious and didn't know what had attacked them, but as she came too her family was dead and her mother wept over her father. She had blamed Skypaw for what had happened and from that day refused to even look at her. Although her mother and her died it was like she had lost her entire family and she had been helpless to do anything.

Three moons later, she had become a warrior, she did her work as a warrior then sulked. She has never forgotten the mangled bodies of her family, but she has become happier, for the lack over better words. She refuses to take a mate, but that doesn't stop her from living her life. After the incident she finally gave into the need for perfection that Stormheart wanted. She is looking for that special someone, but is scared to actually find them because she doesn't want to lose anyone else.

▐║⟨ R E L A T I O N S ⟩║▌

⊱ F a m i l y ⊰

➢ Father ║ Cloudheart ║ Deceased
➢ Mother ║ Ravenflight ║ Alive
➢ Brother ║ Tigerpelt ║ Deceased
➢ Sister ║ Snowleap ║ Deceased

⊱ M a t e ⊰

➢ N/A

⊱ C r u s h ⊰

➢ Stormheart

▐║⟨ O T H E R ⟩║▌

➢ Her family was killed by a large dog

Skydust
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