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message 1: by Spencer {Lee/Simon/Mad Hatter} (last edited Apr 18, 2014 04:28PM) (new)

Spencer {Lee/Simon/Mad Hatter} (SpencerLeeFletcher) | 33 comments Name: Théo Elliot Williams
Gender: male
Age: 16
Birthday: Oct. 10
Faction Before the Choosing Ceremony: Candor

Appearance:
Written Description: He has greyish, black hair, blue eyes, always has a compass in his pocket for good luck
Hair Color: Greyish black.
Eye Color: Dark blue
Skin Tone: A little tanned but mostly white
Body Shape: Slim with little muscle
Height: 5'2 (short)
Weight: 132
Pitch of voice: A lot of emotion is heard plainly, but the pitch is not very deep
Other: He always wears at least one black ring on his right hand. He has a scar on his knee that he got from jumping off a house(no one knows why he did it). He also has a nick on his left ear, it was punishment for lying at Candor

Personality: Théo is one of the most reckless people out there, he always tells the truth, even if it is a spy he is talking to, and he dives head first into a situation, usually without a plan. He has some spunk in him and betrays everyone, but the people he really trusts. He is not the most consistent person to trust, he is always late and he sometimes doesn't show up. He always has a good time, now matter what it is he's doing. He is very sentimental about his things and keeps them and loves them. He is one of the best friends you could have, he will do anything for you, even lie. That is the only exception to his streak of truth-telling.

History: Théo grew up as a candor, learning to always tell the truth, no matter the consequence. He grew obidiantly and he always listened and never lied, though he didn't like living in Candor much. He really liked being reckless and daring, though he never showed it. One day something change in him, he lied, but only occasionally, and he didn't listen, didn't care about anything. One day, when he admitted to his parents that he lied, they said that it was ok, just that if he did it again there would be consequences. But he did lie again. He lied to everyone, just to help his friend, his friend wanted to leave Candor, he hated it, so he left and told Théo to lie and tell them that he went to see the eritude compound. They found his friends body outside the fence a few days later, he had drowned. Théo got off easy and only had 1/4 of his ear cut off.

Family: He is an only child and his mother and father are still alive
Mother: Laura Annie Williams 47 Candor. She is a nice and loving person, she will keep secrets, even if you have to tell the truth at Candor and she will never hurt you on purpose.
Father: Andrew Benjamin Williams 50. Andrew goes by Benjamin and is a loving person, though unlike his wife, he always tells the truth.
Older Sister: N/A
Older Brother: N/A
Younger Sister: N/A
Younger Brother: N/A

What Faction you Character would like to go to: Dauntless
What Faction(s) Your Character got on the Aptitude Test: To be filled in after the Aptitude Test
What Faction your Character Chose: To be filled in after the Choosing Ceremony
Divergent: No

Other: He will probably choose dauntless


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

Don't forget to finish. Someone could come along and take the Erudite male slot before your character is finished and approved.


Spencer {Lee/Simon/Mad Hatter} (SpencerLeeFletcher) | 33 comments I will, don't worry


Spencer {Lee/Simon/Mad Hatter} (SpencerLeeFletcher) | 33 comments I just need the personality


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

Ok let me know when you're done


Spencer {Lee/Simon/Mad Hatter} (SpencerLeeFletcher) | 33 comments The image might not be working, but otherwise it's done


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

Alright one sec


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

A few things:

1) you need atleast 7 sentences for the personality

2) the history must be atleast 8 sentences

3) he cannot have already chosen dauntless, the choosing ceremony hasn't taken place yet, that would also mean he probably wouldn't have a dauntless tattoo

4)the aptitude test hasn't yet taken place

5) there is an image error

6) the last other must be filled out


Spencer {Lee/Simon/Mad Hatter} (SpencerLeeFletcher) | 33 comments Ok, I'll fix it


Spencer {Lee/Simon/Mad Hatter} (SpencerLeeFletcher) | 33 comments Can you show me the code for a picture again?


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

<.img src="paste link here"/.> Remove the periods.


Spencer {Lee/Simon/Mad Hatter} (SpencerLeeFletcher) | 33 comments Yes! I'm done!


message 13: by [deleted user] (new)

For the final other, move it to what faction your character would like to go to.


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

Ok I'm pretty sure you ment to put dauntless as the faction he wants to go to but it's up to you

Approved


Spencer {Lee/Simon/Mad Hatter} (SpencerLeeFletcher) | 33 comments Yeah, thanks


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

Alright you now have an APPROVED initiate


message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

Go over to the trainers request thread and officially rerequest a trainer


Spencer {Lee/Simon/Mad Hatter} (SpencerLeeFletcher) | 33 comments Does it have to be a whole different person?


message 20: by [deleted user] (new)

The trainer will have to be another person yes


message 22: by [deleted user] (new)

Alright good luck with making him


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