Young Writers discussion

Rated PG13 for thematic element.



To be
or not be be?
That is the question.
a maelstrom of Despair
sucks me in its deadly waters
Maiden of my youth, Innocence
brutally murdered by Lies. By Life.
I stand alone in the quagmire -sinking-
To end or not to end? That is the question.
Shall I brave the temporary pain of Mortality
that will lead to the everlasting Freedom thereof?
Exhiliration. Bliss. Immunity to scarring Pain.
Or is it? Who honestly knows? For those
who have made the journey have not
returned to tell the tale. Unknown.
Is it Cowardice that compells
me to stay, or is it Bravery?
Shakespeare murmurs
To be or not to be?
The question
remains.

I like this one too I wish I had something really intelligent and constructive to say but I'm sitting here hitting my cup against the floor because I like this poem