Writer's Aid discussion

I wrote this story in Creative Writing class; we came up with a random topic to write on. Very random, actually. So in this story you might find explicit or troubling themes such as blood and gore, extreme narcissism, violence, and incest (yes, I know what you're thinking). So if it's not your cup of tea, well~There might also be spelling or grammar errors, since I didn't do a good job of proofreading.

IN THE PROCESS OF EDITING

I could help you proofread, if you need. And that story sounds super interesting and creative!

That would be great, I might PM you when I'm done then!

Sure, please do!