Writer's Aid discussion

This is where I will bounce ideas off y'all

What do you think of These names together in a Group



Johnathon (John) 17Chinese
Timothy (Tim) 17Netherlands
Matthew (Mattie) 16Scottish
William (Billy) 15Italien
Archer 14Middle Eastern
Oliver (Ollie) 13Irish
Peter 12Italien
James 12Eastern European
Thomas (Tommy) 12Irish
Edward (Eddie) 11Irish
Luke 10Mexican
Tyler 10Welsh
Jake 9Australian
Jack 9Australian

It's reminding me of the Bible :D

I can see how you'd be reminded of that, I never really though of it like that, but I have 3 out of 4 Gospels and some other apostles

Only Mark isn't here. It just occurred to me since I have a couple of names from your list in one of my fantasies.

Which one's?

John, Luke and Matthew. I left out Mark, too.

Haha, poor Mark

XD

I just added the Ages in case you were curious, I will add ethnicity in a minute

Looks good. :)

thanks, I am doing a sort of revamped Peter Pan, those are my lost Boys (and Pete of course)

Then it would fit perfectly. At least I think.

thanks, in my Version they are a high tech Crew of theives

Peter is of course the mastermind, her older brother Billy is the best Hacker not to be confused with Mattie the Team nerd/Genius, John is the muscle, Tim is the best theif, coming in Close second would be Little Luke, the smallest of the Group, but an excellent Theif. Two of our Irishman Ollie and Tommy, along with James are the Teams best con men. the twins (Jack and Jake) are just kinda there where ever you Need them. Normally on the outside we got Eddie who kinda runs tech Support and a pretty good hacker himself, and Archer who runs survellance and extraction if needed. Then there is Tyler who is small , and extremely fast and excellent at gymnastics who is there for a distraction or if you Need to get past some lasers.

What do yall think of a large international organization made up of the world's most nfluential crime families. I am calling them Nevers (in English that is) and calling their safe places, or places where they live Neverlands (get it) and having my lost Boys me a Group of rogue never Kids. Just an idea that I'm playing with

So this book was always going to be about a Girl named Mya, pretty much following her as she grows up. Now the book was going to include Little flashbacks to her fathers life, told through letters that he wrote, though he is already dead. But, recently I had the idea that instead of telling the Father's Story through letters, what if I made the whole book in his Point of few,as he watches his daughters life unseen as a type of ghost and then we would flashback in his Point of view. I don't know, what do you guys think. What idea to you like the best.

You're just saying that because you inspired it

Ahhhhhh

you are no help

Aw... Don't get into a fight. Use whatever you think the readers would enjoy. If not, use both ideas.