Enchanted Academy for the Magically Gifted [REVAMPING] discussion

I initially wanted to do this as an RP with someone in my 1x1 group but he disappeared on me; so I decided to try write a short story on it, not too long, but not too short either. I'll probably just give up halfway, but I want to start the ball rolling here :p Here's the synopsis for the story, tell me if you like the concept or not XD

Asher Knight, the prince everyone admires even in the faraway lands. Everyone plants their hope in him marrying the Princess Sophia, from a neighbouring kingdom, but Asher does not like her attitude after several meetings with her. He preferred girls who were not so conservative, not so clingy and not so flirtatious. But he has never chanced upon once so far.

Ethel White, the thief that is renowned from stealing from rich people to help the poor pay their taxes. She is a solo thief, never being able to work in huge groups, and she does not trust people easily. Ethel likes working alone, and she is extremely fine with that as in a neighbouring Kingdom, in the town of Nottingham, her close friend Robin Hood was also helping the poor. They knew each other from a long way back, but that was another story to tell. Because there was no one she trusted in her town, she worked alone and helps people.

When Prince Asher meets thief Ethel, it was instant click. They knew they were meant for each other, but as a royal, Asher isn't allowed to marry Ethel, whom he thought was a poor commoner and Ethel doesn't want to suddenly get rich. She loves her job as a thief, but they two cannot be apart so they hold secret meetings in alleyways, getting closer every night. Until one day, when Ethel's secret of being a thief is let out of the bag, everything starts changing for them.

This is really long, for a synopsis anyway, but yeah, the general plot. What do you guys think? ^^

Jo wrote: "Oh my gosh I love this!! The overall concept is really good, Ethel seems like a good contrast to Asher but similar at the same time."

Haha thanks :D I'll post the first chapter up tomorrow, and well, we can just see how many grammar and spelling mistakes I make afterward :p

Ooooh! I once thought of a story like that too, except that it was a princess and a boy thief in my case ^^ the plot was too shallow though so I never tried roleplaying it out with someone

Shoot, high five for the great minds that think alike XD You know I actually want to do this story but I don't have the time to get anything done! It's such a bother ><

I get that feeling, and I hate it too. What happens when Asher finds out Ethel is a thief?

XD When I actually get to writing that part, maybe you'd find out the answer haha

Haha alright I'll wait xD

*one eternity later*
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