Writer's Aid discussion

x first chapter
x second chapter
x third chapter


comments; feedback allowed xoxox

First of all, let me know when this book comes out! It's really good, and when I got to the third chapter and realized that was all there was I was thinking "dang it...". Anyway, if I were to offer critique, I would only mention that there were a few grammatical errors; most of which won't interfere with reading the book. I will say the only one that distracted me for more than a few seconds was when you misspelled "nightingale". As far as the story goes though, your characters are interesting and described well, the situation is relatable, and the whole thing just pulls you in after a few paragraphs. I hope you're able to publish this :)

Yayy thank you! The book is actually finished, I'm just revising them and uploading them.

Cool. Be sure to let everyone know. I'd like to see where it was going :)

Thank you ^-^ I was afraid the third chapter was boring since there wasn't much action but I just HAD to take a chapter to fully elaborate all characters xD

Okay I've only just started reading, so I'll give proper feedback when I've read some more but I've just got to say that I love your writing style so much.