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Jan 24, 2016 12:42PM
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A lot of telling instead of showing.
A lot of SAID when said is suppose to be DEAD.
A lot of SAID when said is suppose to be DEAD.
Descriptive writing.
And trying to explain a feeling instead of just saying 'she felt sad'
And trying to explain a feeling instead of just saying 'she felt sad'
Trying to keep the story intersting
Just starting is the hardest part for me! I'm way too particular about the first sentences.
M wrote: "Coming up with character names."
Yes I agree
Yes I agree
hmmm since ive only just started taking up writing...the hardest thing so far is the bit where...I'm always saying the word said he said or she said etc....instead of just spitting out wat they said...not sure if that makes sense
Finishing one story at a time! I tend to jump from one story to the next when I'm writing so finishing a book is a long process. I also tend to have carry-on sentences. :)
Ravanna wrote: "Finishing one story at a time! I tend to jump from one story to the next when I'm writing so finishing a book is a long process. I also tend to have carry-on sentences. :)"Omg same!!!!




