Young Writers Group discussion

Hi! :) This is my first time putting my words out there for people to read and I'm eager to hear your thoughts.

Yelling ricochets in my ears,
I cower down like a dog
Chained up,
Shrunken away from fear,
Tied to a leash
With no slack,
Given commands I am to
Follow,
Being neglected
The privileges
That are taken for granted,
Wishing there was some
Way out,
But knowing I'm stuck
With the owner
I've been given.

Wow, I liked this. When I read this poem the feeling I got was pain. I would suggest adding more to this. Love your word choice. I especially like the word ricochets.

Like it!

Thank you! :)