Writer's Aid discussion

Carissa Junifer was adopted and raised to be a princess. But when she is sent to a boarding school due to her recent out lashes and behavior Carissa finds the fun of both being a princess and a normal teenage girl. But with her school holding royal children (Prince and princesses) Carissa is expected to become her old self again. But it makes it almost impossible when she meets Chance.

Chance was sent to boarding school due to the fact him and his friends set a bakery and stable on fire. The school holds him as an example on why the students need to change before they can even think about heading back home.

"Ah Come on Kitten lets have some fun." He says to me his blonde hair messy.

"Kitten here wants to go home Chance. Not live in this hell hole." I snap my hair flying around in the wind.

"Don't we all Kitten." Chance says leaving me behind.

Nice can;t wait to hear more. Love the Name Chance by the way

Lol thanks it was that or Beau. And I just posted the Prologue

Ohhh Beau. Thank goodness you went with Chance

It sounds good, but it isn't my cup of tea :( I don't want to comment since I don't want your feelings to be hurt.

MORE! I Want MORE! Please!

Hallie wrote: "It sounds good, but it isn't my cup of tea :( I don't want to comment since I don't want your feelings to be hurt."

It's fine. It's nice to have feedback from other people. It really helps a writer grow in writing.