Creative Writing Ideas discussion

Here I will post any ideas for book or roleplay characters that I have (it is my favorite part about writing). You may comment on them.

If anyone wants to use one for roleplay groups or anything, ask me first please. Thanks!

Specifically for Percy Jackson rp's

Indentifictaion
Name: Grace
Age: sixteen
Birthday: April 2nd
Family: mother- Athena (Greek goddess of wisdom and battle); father- Mark Smith, age 50

Appearance
Eyes: gray
Head: freckles, soft wavy brown hair, has dimples when she smiles
Clothing: normally just wears a t-shirt and old faded jeans under her armor, often has her celestial bronze sword with her
Height: 5'6"

Personality
Grace is really nice and a lot of fun to be around, but fights fiercely against her enemies. Being a daughter of Athena, she always finds the logical way out of things and can really think out of the box. She is really popular, but she doesn't let the attention go to her head.

History
Grace grew up in a small house on a secluded beach on the east coast. when she was just five, a hurricane hit. her and her father both survived, but she lost contact with him. She was on her own for about a month before a satyr took her to Camp Half-Blood.

Talents
Grace is a pretty decent singer, and she plays piano. She isn't as strong as you would think, but she is really quick and has good battle strategy.

If you want, I can also draw your character. So you have more references for her.