Hey guys! I'm trying to get back into writing after dealing with horrible writer's block for a year. It's science fiction based, but also has two main, female characters. There's more of a description on the link. Let me know what you think and how you think I should develop characters, give them depth, etc... The stories themselves are written with a 30 minute time limit with no editing until a day later when I type them up.
Here's the link:
https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...