Pakistani Readers discussion

Magar

kahaan say kahaan chalay aayay hum
baadalon Kay beech urnay lagay hum
bhook jaisee takleef ko magar
Is zameen say na mita sakay hum

Kahan say kahan chalay aayay hum
Chamaktay Chaand ko bhee choo aayay hum
Hewaan ko itnay qareeb say Jaan liya magar
Insaan ki fitrat ko na pehchaan sakay hum

kahaan say kahaan chalay aayay hum
Saikron amraaz ki dawa dhoond layay hum
Ghurbat jaisay zeher ko magar
Phailnay say na rok sakay hum

kahaan say kahaan chalay aayay hum
Tanz o mazaah Kay jhanday gaar gayay hum
Duniya Kay mazloomon Kay do aansoo magar
Chaah kar bhee na poch sakay hum

kahaan say kahaan chalay aayay hum
Bohot Baray kaarigar ban gayay hum
Rishton Kay uljhay huay dhaagay magar
Itni muddath mein bhee na suljha sakay hum

kahaan say kahaan chalay aayay hum
Khoob siyaasat seekh aayay hum
Jung o fasaad say logon ko magar
Kisi zamaanay mein na rok sakay hum

kahaan say kahaan chalay aayay hum
Kehtay hain barray musannif ban gayay hum
Masoom jaanon ka lahoo magar
Is dharti say na mita sakay hum

kahaan say kahaan chalay aayay hum
Koson door nikal gayay hum
Jis manzil thak pohonchna tha magar
Usay najaanay kis mor par chor aayay hum

Masha Allah Bhut Khub. Takhaiul kamal ka hae. Allah Umer draz kray.

This an amazing poem that you wrote and i love it. Zabardast.

Thank you Mohammad and Maira, for reading this rather long poem, and for your generous comments

@Lara
Mashallah!
Your poem left me speechless; so wonderfully written! I couldn't stop myself and wide-eyed, kept on reading.. Please write more whenever you can.. :) great job!

Beautiful. May I post it on Facebook in Arabic fonts for our readers?

Thank you, Midhat and Ashfaq. Yes, certainly feel free to post in Urdu font. There's nothing more rewarding than to have one's words reach more people.

alaa yr kia bat hy,,, qasmy