Creative Writing discussion

Natasha Pierre and the Great Comet of 1812 (no I am totally not comet trash): Alternate Grishaverse One
Natasha - Alina
Sonya - Mal no. 1
Andrey - Mal no. 2
Anatole - Nikolai (no. 1?)
Helene - Nikolai no. 2 (?)
Pierre - kind of a male version of Baghra???
Marya D. or Princess Mary - Baghra
The Darkling - The Darkling

Natasha Pierre and the Great Comet of 1812 (no I am totally not comet trash): Alternate Grishaverse Two
Character castings not final

Anatole - Kaz Brekker, but also a playboy because he's Anatole
Helene - an original character sort of both Jesper and Inej
Natasha - sort of both Inej and Nina
Pierre - Helvar, love interest of Natasha later on
Dolokhov - Jesper, but also Helene's love interest (he's a "crazy good shot")
Princess Mary - Wylan, except she can read (I hated that plot twist, so we'll need to think of something else. Her sexual orientation is also under debate because we only meet her in three songs and some people say she's not in love with anyone and others say she's in love with Natasha, but we'll never know for sure)

give me some suggestions, guys! (you don't need to know the Comet fandom, I just need a bit of assistance in regards to the question marks)

revisions
Anatole - The Darkling
Andrey - Nikolai
Sonya - Mal
Marya D. - Baghra
Natasha - Alina