Foreworld discussion

As I draw close to completion of Cloven Earth, I've been editing and cleaning up Broken Sky. I also wanted to tie the covers together and make them into a series: Red Messanger. Long-winded way to say voila,



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C.B. Matson wrote: "As I draw close to completion of Cloven Earth, I've been editing and cleaning up Broken Sky. I also wanted to tie the covers together and make them into a series: Red Messanger. Long-winded way to ..."

A) Looks good on my Kindle Fire HD6 !

B) I think the KW logo might impinge on the series title as is.

C) Wait, you lost the hazel eyes??? Best part of the original cover!

Yeah, actual cover has series name at top. For the gif I took advantage of the open bottom area. Eyes and Mongol soldiers were too complicated (liked 'em myself but...).

C.B. Matson wrote: "Yeah, actual cover has series name at top. For the gif I took advantage of the open bottom area. Eyes and Mongol soldiers were too complicated (liked 'em myself but...)."

What must be must be :-(

The gif is cool, though! Someday books on shelves in stores will be flashing for our attention like that!

Edging closer to pub with Cloven Earth. Here's the cover, together with the cover for Broken Sky.





Critical comments would definitely be appreciated.