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Character's Name: James Charles Howard
Gender: Male
Blood Type: Pure Blood
Age: 11
Birthday: August 24

Wand:
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How the Wand Looks: His wand is of a dark brown color. The tip comes away from the dark brown into a lighter color. The color of the handle is the opposite of the tip and goes into a darker color to black. James purchased his wand from Ollivander's.

Appearance:
Description:
Eye Color: blue
Hair Color: blonde
Skin Tone: medium
Height: 5,1
Pitch of Voice: average
Weight: 100 pounds
Other: James' face is kind of round and he has a small nose. His eyes are a medium to light blue and his hair are blonde but with a little bit of yellow when the sun shines. He has a few freckles on his nose and a few on his arms.
Personality: James likes sport very much and went to a Muggle School, so he played Muggle sport at his old school. His parents didn't want him to go to a muggle school, but he really wanted to so they let him. His family don't mind Muggle Borns at all. He has a smaller brother, so he is very patient and jokes around lot with him. He can joke around but he knows where the line is. He doesn't mind school but he'd much rather be outside and play football than do homework or study, but he still always does his school work. The only thing he ever really worries about is if his family or friends are alright or not.

History: James grew up in a house with his family and grandparents. His parents both went to Ravenclaw, so they insisted on him reading from an early age on. When he was younger he used to practise easy spells with his grandfather in his basement. He was very close to his grandfather and was really upset when his parents decided to move away from them, so when he went to school he made all the tables in the class room fly. The Ministry of Magic had to come to wipe all the pupils' and teachers' memories. James has a little brother called Oliver and always plays football in the garden with him. James' best friend became jealous after James told him he was a wizard and tried to turn everyone against him. So he told everyone James was a wizard but thankfully no one believed him. When James got his letter, he told his friend he's going away to live with his grandparents, out of fear to anger him.
Family:
Susan Howard, mother, 41, Pure Blood, Ravenclaw
David Howard, father, 44, Half Blood, Ravenclaw
Oliver Howard, brother, 8

Pet: Owl
Name: Rudolph
Age: 9 months
Gender: Male
Appearance:
Description: Rudolph has a brown and white feather coat. His eyes are bulgy and yellow with really big, black pupils. He is quite small and has a high and squeeky hoot. Rudolph likes to peck ones finger with his small brown beak to say hello.

Other: James only had one strange magic thing happen to him and tries to control himself. He doesn't know if he would be any good at Quidditch but wants to give it a try. His favorite animals are wolves or tigers, but he isn't sure if those animals can be Patronuses or not.

First of all, there are only 4 sentences in the Personality section, and Erza asked for seven. Try to add more, please! Does he have a good sense of humor, or is he serious? How much does he like school? What is his attitude towards Muggles and Muggleborns? Also, if he was pureblood, he probably wouldn't have attended a Muggle school. Usually (from what I've read) young Wizards just wait until Hogwarts age. Also, the "other" section is lacking two sentences. Maybe add something about what his Patronus or Animagus form would most likely be, or whether he wants to join a Quidditch team.

Oh, sorry about that...Is he okay now?