Hello! I've made 2 different drafts of a trailer for "Beneath White Clouds," which will begin funding on Inkshares soon. Not being a seasoned video editor, I'd really dig some feedback/reaction from strangers. These videos are currently "unlisted" on Youtube, but the links will take you there. The first half of each version is the same - it's the captioning on the second half that changes.
I've made 2 different drafts of a trailer for "Beneath White Clouds," which will begin funding on Inkshares soon.
Not being a seasoned video editor, I'd really dig some feedback/reaction from strangers. These videos are currently "unlisted" on Youtube, but the links will take you there. The first half of each version is the same - it's the captioning on the second half that changes.
Take 2: Goofy Captioning: https://youtu.be/_jIgAXQKPjA
Take 3: Not goofy captioning: https://youtu.be/h8g8vGQvoHg
I'll be grateful for any feedback, whether it's just a votee for one over the other, or a more detailed critique.
Many Many thanks,
Eric