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message 1: by [deleted user] (last edited May 26, 2014 01:34PM) (new)

Name: Elias 'Eli' Xavier Wilks
Gender: Male
Age: Twenty-five
Birthday: September fourth
Faction they Instruct: Erudite

Appearance:
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Written Description:
Hair Colour: Depending upon the light, Eli's hair can be a rich textured brown, or a golden crisp brown.
Eye Colour: Icy blue
Skin Tone: Fair
Body Shape: Mesomorph
Height: 6'1"
Weight: 140.2 lbs
Pitch of voice: Low, slow, precise
Other: Since joining Erudite, Elias started to realise with the amount of time he spent on computers, his eyes sight was decreasing. So to remedy this issue, he took to wearing glass, large black framed ones. Without these, he struggles to see long distance, as he is short sighted.

Personality: Since a young age, Elias has always shown incredibly knowledge about computer systems and programming. At the age of perhaps seven it was becoming increasingly obvious, this boy was a whiz kid when it came to technology. Seeing as his born Faction was Amity, this talent never really had a chance to shine unless he was tasked with looking into fertiliser. But we can safely say, this boy is bound for great things.

Many people are naturally very defensive about the Factions they were born into, and in Elias's case, he feels he truly has to fight Amity's corner. Because they definitely wouldn't do it themselves, being peace lovin' and all. He feels that many people dismiss Amity, and this gets him easily riled about this topic, so be careful about what you say about this around him.. he's fiercely protective.

Elias is always striving for better. So coming to him with a final result you better hope to god it's damn near perfect, or he will ruin it and make you fix it and solve the initial fault. Practically nothing is perfect in his eyes, everything has the ability to be improved. Sometimes he can be slightly harsh on his initiates when criticizing their work, but doesn't believe the mummsie approach will ever work.

History: As previously stated, we know Elias was born into Amity. Both his parents were Faction born so he believed that he too would remain there with his parents. But this all changed upon stumbling across the computer rooms hidden within Amity headquarters at the tender age of seven. Elias discovered a gift which had lain dormant within him for all these years, computer hacking.

He was always thought of as a strange little boy within his home life and faction life, even his two elder sisters found him rather odd. But nonetheless they loved him, as every Amity attempted to do, doting on the strange boy. Upon the choosing ceremony it was made very clear to him, by both his parents and faction, he did not belong within the simple minded community of farmers, no.

Upon his choice of Erudite, Elias was watched very carefully as he flew through his initiate testing. Making quite an impression upon the greatest of minds, becoming a prodigy of some sorts, he shadowed many of his teachers and learned faster than they could teach.

Family:
Mother: Allison Wilks [nee Adams], 54, Amity, a naturally kind minded woman with a sensible head upon her shoulders, remained in original faction.
Father: Robert Wilks, deceased, 56, Amity, a quite and somewhat reserved man, devoted to his family.
Older Sister: Rosemary Foster [nee Wilks], Amity 29, a loving daughter, now with her own two children.
Older Sister: Helena Wilks, 27, Abnegation, quite like her father was, devoted to her work.
Older Brother: N/A
Younger Sister: N/A
Younger Brother: N/A

Divergent: No.

Other: Elias sometimes suffers from home sickness, and will retreat to his quarters during this time and tends to be much sharper with his initiates.

Pet:
Name: Osiris
Gender: Female
Age: Two
Species: Cat
Appearance:
Description: Osiris is a rare white russian blue cat, her coat is startling white, and gives out a surprising contrast with her ice blue eyes, the only imperfection about this feline is her small height.
Other: The cat is well known throughout the Erudite compound, and has been known to lash out at those who try and pet her.


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

Don't forget to finish!


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

I won't, it's being able to get onto a computer, I shall Continue with him sometime today


message 4: by Martha Jones, Head Mod (new)

Martha Jones | 59 comments Mod
Please finish him. I really would like to have everything started soon.


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

Okay, I think I have him finished!


message 6: by Martha Jones, Head Mod (new)

Martha Jones | 59 comments Mod
1. Could you fix the personality to the sentences are not just big run on sentences?
2. Your History must be at least eight sentences.


message 7: by Martha Jones, Head Mod (new)

Martha Jones | 59 comments Mod
Please make these changes so we can start.


message 8: by Martha Jones, Head Mod (new)

Martha Jones | 59 comments Mod
Hova?


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

Sorry, my internet on my phone has ran out and well I'm not able to get onto a computer of recent, I am likely to maybe get on one tonight?


message 10: by Martha Jones, Head Mod (new)

Martha Jones | 59 comments Mod
Okay. Please do though. Everyone is waiting for him to be finished so that we may start.


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

So sorry! I didn't know we were that ready! I will seriously try to get on tonight!


message 12: by Martha Jones, Head Mod (new)

Martha Jones | 59 comments Mod
Okay. Thanks.


message 13: by [deleted user] (new)

Okay, I think I have edited it now.


message 14: by Martha Jones, Head Mod (new)

Martha Jones | 59 comments Mod
APPROVED. :D


message 15: by [deleted user] (new)

Woohoo!


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