Pakistani Readers discussion

Zindagi ki rami hum
Aksar hee khaila karthay hain
Dushman ki kami puri
Ab dost hee Kya karthay hain

Doosron par aitbaar karnay ki
Baath hum nahin karthay hain
Bharosa thornay ka zimma ab
Apnay hee liya karthay hain

Saanp Kay dasnay say hum
Ab dara nahin karthay hain
Zeher logon ki baathon ka
Kai baar piya karthay hain

Dil Kay darwaazay par taala hum
Lagaaya zaroor karthay hain
Par Dil mein basnay waalay hee
Dilon ko thora karthay hain

Wow :')

Thankyou Amna and Zarshall for reading and commenting...

Thankyou zainab. Praise from an astute critic has its own charm.

wonderful. love the ending.

Thankyou Maira. You look so much like my niece, I'm missing her.