Writing Help discussion

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www.goodreads.com/story/show/44259.no...

Please send feedback on both of these.

Bunch of edits on my story

I suggest to read it from the beginning ^^

check out my writing i love to have feedback

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two very different types of stories!

ok! only i u give me feed back on mine!

something else different!

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its a poem and a letter

Hey I finished another chapter to my story ^^

Awesome.

Was that sixteen?

this is a poem would love feedback! ill leave u some =)
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This short story needs something, but I'm not sure what. If anyone could give me some help, I'd appreciate it, and I'll read your writing as well. (But I'm not a good poetry critic - yet.)

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i'd love for you guys to tell me whats good and bad about my stories

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Thanks :)

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please read and tell me what you think.

I will look as soon as I can

I really wont every one to read this please!:

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read this plz!
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yay!

READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

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heres my list:

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/2...

comment plz. i luv feedback =]

HEY EVERYBODY I JUST JOINED!! YAY!!!

O ya i forgot-

Heres my story, please read and i love feedback so leave a comment, dont b shy! I knw there are a lot of chapters, but theyre all pretty short and its pretty smooth reading. Thanks guys!!!

www.goodreads.com/story/show/46134.Vi...

Read, read, read!! :p

Catherine wrote: "HEY EVERYBODY I JUST JOINED!! YAY!!!"

I know, I said this in one of the other topics, but.... Hi!

Hi! Madhins invited me and i have my story up and everything already!! Yay!!

Awesome!

Uh huh! So check it out if u get the chance!! :-p

Okay.

lol

Yup...

I gtg

kk l8r

Here's some of my writing:

www.goodreads.com/story/list/2390897

I hope you like it and please give feedback.

kk i'll read it asap

I read the first chapter it was really good

Of which one?

things always happen, i just got to the 4th chapter... ill finish it in parts, because i still need to write

Oh. Okay.

here I got the beginning to blood song (just 2 paragraphs): http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

Jade wrote: "kk i'll read it asap"

Thanks for the feedback. And sorry about the cliffhanger, I just couldn't think of anything and was busy. : )

lolz, it was awesome!

Really? Thank you!

can u guys join my group? it's called Opinions opinions opinions

Hey guys!!:D
I would love feedback!!:D

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It starts a little fast, and I think you need to give some more back round... It was REALLY good

Thank you!!:D
I will try and work on the prologue!:]]]

kk

remember to check out all my stories to!

for anybody hu has time
www.goodreads.com/story/show/46134.Vi...

the chapters are really short, and u dont have to read them all if u dont want to. the last one is still unfinished tho, im working on it :P

WOULD APPRECIATE FEEDBACK!!