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message 1: by [deleted user] (last edited Dec 11, 2016 11:04PM) (new)

Have you ever wanted to be a part of the action in the DIVERGENT book series? Well, here’s your chance! You can make your very own character that would fit in perfectly in the Divergent world. Choose their Group and role-play.

The factions are Dauntless (the brave),

Amity (the peaceful),

Erudite (the intelligent),

Abnegation (the selfless),

Candor (the honest).


ALL CHARACTERS NEED TO BE ACCEPTED BEFORE PLAYED WITH! AND PLEASE DO NOT COMMENT ON PEOPLE'S SHEETS UNLESS YOU'RE A MOD!
Please be patient.

WRITE YOUR CHARACTER SHEETS HERE!
If you have more than two characters, at least one of them has to be male.
You can have up to four characters.
(If you need inspiration, check out some of the other character sheets.)

Include:
- Name
- Gender
- Age
- Faction:
- Appearance(with a description, at least four lines, not just a picture)
- Personality (at least four lines) - Remember to make the personality fit the Group traits

- History (at least four lines)
- (Pet) - this is also optional as well and just for fun D!
- Whatever you find relevant for your character


message 2: by [deleted user] (last edited Dec 15, 2016 10:24AM) (new)

Name: Scarlet Nightingale
Nickname(s): Scar
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Faction: Dauntless (born and chosen)

description

Appearance: She has long Dark brown hair that goes all the way down to her waist. Sometimes she wears her hair loose and sometimes she braids her hair. She has pale skin but when she is angry, her cheeks become rosy red. She has Stern, Mysterious grey eyes which seemed to have seen many horrible and devastating thing and long eyelashes. Her height ranges from 5’4-5’5 and she is very slim. Scarlett has thin pink lips and sharp features, which only beautifies and makes her appearance more dazzling and Queer. She inherited her sharp features that everyone in the nightingale family has mysterious grey eyes and sharps cheekbone. She is very Pretty but in a more dazing and awestruck way. . She has soft smooth skin, free of blemishes, which many envious of She carries a knife, darts and a fully loaded gun in a secret pocket in her belt. Scarlett is very well built in terms of her body due to all the training she goes through and always pushing her body to its limits. She has long legs and perfect posture. She carries herself with dignity and humility.She usually Black wears the normal clothes of the dauntless faction with pride. She likes o wear casual black jeans, black leather jacket and always converse. Many people says she looks like a girl who has a very devastating story to tell and a born warrior


Personality: Scarlett is a perfect example of the dauntless belief for she is dedicated herself to bravery, courage and fearlessness. She does not accept herself to show any weakness. Therefore, she hasn’t cried once in more than six years. She is tough, Strong-minded and quiet. She is also athletic, so the toughness is inside and outside. She is selfless in many ways, and sacrifices herself for her fellow companions. She demonstrates cunning and a cool head, which helps gain the respect of her “friends”. However, they are more in awe of her ability and strength. Her personality is very reserved and standoffish, which makes people think she is stuck up but She just does not want to be too attached to people for she fears she lose them. Scarlett is very distant, and her tendency to stick to the shadows hides just how intelligent she is and caring . She is very good at blending into the background, which helps her people watch and gather information. She sometimes makes snarky and funny jokes but she does it just to lighten up the mood of her companions. Scarlet is an excellent hunter, archer, gatherer, and trapper, skilled just like a second in command should be and even more. SHE is the person who people turn to if they need something done.

She loves the thrill and adrenaline of running through the ruins of Chicago with the entire dauntless member. She is highly independent and somewhat unnerving. She knows what she wants and has the guts to go to it but can sometimes go overboard. She hates the word”retreat and Give up” and is known to get hot headed about it even in simulators. She can sometimes come as rude and vain which caused her many one sided battle in the past (she destroyed them) and now people stay away from her in awe and fear of their life. However, she is known to be gentle and has shown her devotion and confidence to people who see really trust. She also unlike many people in the dauntless tribe, thinks things through and sees if they have any chance of winning.


History-Her story was tragic and surprising to many people .When she was young, life was blessing a gift to her. She had her mother, father and sister all living peacefully in a grand house. Her dad Malcom ,the vice head of dauntless and a strong and powerful man who many were scared of. Her mom with her quick wits, snarky comments and gentle hugs. She and her sister trained, learned and played with each other. Life was pleasant and she had no worry in the world. At the age of ten, her life took a turn for worse, rumours spread about her father being a traitor and leaking important information out. Their family was devastated and hurt for someone to even think that of them. The rumours spreaded like wildfire and her father was forced to leave dauntless, temporarily which destroyed their families status name. People wearing silver mask and carrying guns broke in their house on 6th December .Her mother hid them, she ran out and started leading the People in the mask away from her children. They watched her die, helpless and too scared to help. That day was the day her family was torn apart. There house was burned to the ground. Two lifeless bodies were carried out, her sisters and hers. Her father mysteriously disappeared, scratched away from history and his title of the “protector” was changed to the “traitor”. Her family name “the nightingale” who was once one of the strongest warriors to enter the dauntless faction was ruined. Her sister after witnessing her mother’s death was brought into coma. When her mother was assassinated, her legs and body was paralyzed by glass shatters and due to shock. Scarlett collects her grief and started trying to rebuild her scattered life. Scarlett cares for her sister until this day and wants to create a better world for her sister. Her goal is to find out who killed her mother, the man in masks, and get revenge and to rid this cruel world of evil. She trains everyday to fulfil this wish and to make it a reality,

- Whatever you find relevant for your character

Secret: She found a letter in the burned ruins of her house stating:

Dear Malcolm
I will protect your family; You will have to do what is required of you and do not fear we will always be behind. The document “Forbidden vow “must be saved from getting in the wrong hands. The people will eventually come and know of our plans. We are all-trusting in you. The strongest of us all
Your dear friend
x
Scarlet hid this knowing that it would add more doubt upon the trust of her late father. She travel around Chicago searching for x or a reason why she had to go through so much pain.


message 3: by Eve O. Spellman (last edited Dec 12, 2016 12:55PM) (new)

Eve O. Spellman - Name: Silver Ora Smith

- Gender: Female

- Age: 16

- Faction: Birth one: Abnegation, Chosen: wants Dauntless

- Appearance: Silver is tall and deathly pale. She has above the ear white hair. Her left eye is silver and her right eye is black. She has a scar that is two inches above her left eye, goes through it, and ends a half an inch above her red lips. She wears the standard Abnegation outfit but really wants to be free to wear what she wants. Silver has a strong, fit figure with a definite features. She doesn't look small but not big either. If you judged her based on her build you would say Dauntless. Her face has definite features and high cheekbones.

- Personality - Remember to make the personality fit the Group traits: Silver is a pensive precocious child. She loves to talk and has a hard staying quiet. She loves to help others and volunteer. Silver loves to do sports and sing and protect and to do dares but her faction disapproves of it. Silver hates Harry and death. Even if she sees someone being hurt, no matter the faction, she will get involved. She loves to learn and know abut others, knowing one day it could be useful. She gets in trouble. A lot.

- History: Silver was born to Sarah and John Smith. Silver loved them till they mysterious died. Silver was adopted by her uncle Harry Jones. Silver had a horrible childhood. She was abused and hurt by her uncle. Silver found he had killed her parents but she was so scared of him that she styed quiet. Silver had gotten the scar from him and she cut her own hair. Everyone at school stays away from her only friends from Dauntless and the Factionless. She loves to help the Factionless. Silver always got along with John and Sarah, they loved her back and helped her fit in. Harry and Silver get along like fire and water. Silver would speak up but Harry has too much power in Abnegation. Silver meet Zach at school when his sister was being bullied. Silver and Zach, um, beat the bullies.

- (Pet) - Black wolf with grey eyes. No one knows of her. Her name is Silvernight and Silver keeps her hidden

- Whatever you find relevant for your character: Divergent. Her aptitude test results were: Dauntless, Abnegation, Amity, Erudite


- Name: Zach Richard Diamond

- Gender: Male

- Age: 16

- Faction: Birth: Dauntless, Chosen: Dauntless

- Appearance: Zach is tall and a little darker than Silver. He has black hair and Silver says it looks like anime. His eyes are stormy grey. He wears black muscle shirt, jeans, and tennis shoes. He has a tattoo of a black snake with red eyes up his spine and the head is on the back of his neck. He has scars up and down his back from training. Zach has a strong, fit figure. He looks slightly slim for a boy but he works out a lot and has muscles of steel. He has a heathy looking face and his features are definite but not as much as Silver.

- Personality - Remember to make the personality fit the Group traits: Zach is a pensive precocious boy. He loves to train and fight. When you can't find him, check the training area. He wants to be able to become a Dauntless leader. He doesn't talk to anyone except to Sapphire, his sister, and Silver. Only those two can get him to talk. He loves to think and be with Sapphire and Silver. Zach got along great with his mom. He felt like he had to protect her. Richard and Zach didn't on great but Zach looked up to his dad and didn't say anything about the beatings. But he his quietly pleased his dad is gone. He hates getting into pointless conversations and arguments. He does believe brawn isn't as important as brains.

- History: Zach was born to Hera and Richard Diamond. Hera was a wonderful mother but his father was fine. Richard was harsh during training and that's how he got the scars. Richard was kicked out of the faction when news spread and Richard got into a fight with one of the leaders. Zach still trained. When Zach meet Silver and told her his story and Silver and Zach became friends, well more than that. Zach was impressed when Silver stood up for his sister Sapphire. He found it odd an Abnegation would fight. Since then, Silver, Sapphire and Zach sat together even though no one wanted them too. He was devastated when he learned about Harry but didn't do anything because Silver didn't want him to.

- (Pet) - A black crow with red eyes called Diaval

- Whatever you find relevant for your character: Loves Silver.


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

((( Silver Ora Smith -If I was a ghost, which house would I repersent? Slytherin/Grffindor ))) wrote: "- Name: Silver Ora Smith

- Gender: Female

- Age: 16

- Faction: Birth one: Abnegation, Chosen: wants Dauntless

- Appearance: Silver is tall and deathly pale. She has above the ear white hair. He..."


I just have a few things I'd like you to add into your sheet. :)

Appearance: give us more on their facial structure and body type
Personality: Describe their character more, what they dislikes
History is a bit brief :Add a little more about their parents maybe. What's their relationship with them like?
What was is like for silver growing up. Can you explain how they met.
Overall a decent piece of work.
(you may get difffernt comments due to there being three moderators)


Elizabeth ♛Smart Girls Love Trashy Books♛  (pinkhairedwannabe) | 89 comments Mod
Name: Kate Rainbow

Gender: Female

Age: 16

Faction: Birth one is Dauntless, her chosen one is Amity.

Appearance: Very tall, about 5'8, and has some muscles on her due to years of working out and consistently pushing herself to the limits. As a result, her face is pretty average: her nose is tiny, her eyes are a little big and circular, and are a dark, deep green. Her lips are also tiny and a light pink, which some people think is her lipstick, but it's not. Her skin is a light peach color, and as said before, her body type is quite well-built and doesn't have very many curves to it. Her hair falls to her waist and is dyed a violet purple, and very wavy and curly. Under her right eye is a tattoo of a pink heart. She also has a weak left ankle due to falling off a building when she was eleven and it broke, and never healed properly. Too much pressure on her ankle would strain or even break it again.

Personality: Despite hailing from Dauntless, Kate is pretty shy, quiet, and prefers to work with her friends instead of fighting with them. She also hates pushing her body to the max, she'd much rather stay on the sidelines and cheer for other people doing the fighting. She also cares for nature and used to keep a tiny flower garden on her windowsill back home, but it was very hard to find resources for it, and it soon died, which upset her greatly. She's also very sensitive and doesn't like being pushed around or forced to do something she hates. If she was, she'd just cry about it. As stated before though, she's a kind-hearted, sweet girl who cares for nature and her friends much more than she does about herself.

History: Kate was born into Dauntless, a bad match if there ever was one. Ever since she started school, she was made to exercise, fight, and constantly push both her physical and mental state to the absolute limit. She would always end up injured and constantly lose the respect of her peers, and it's a wonder she survived as long as she did. Her father wanted her to fit in better appearance-wise, so he convinced her to get that tattoo and dye her hair as a present for her fourteenth birthday. She actually likes her purple hair though and continues to dye it in Amity, using vegetable juices. She never knew her mother, but according to her father, she was a total daredevil, doing all sorts of crazy stunts just because she could.

When she was eleven, she was dared to jump off a tall skyscraper onto a trampoline down below, and she did it, not wanting to be made fun of. She landed on the trampoline the wrong way, badly breaking her ankle, but she didn't have enough time to properly nurse it, so it's been really weak ever since.

When her initiation ceremony came at sixteen, everyone thought she was going to stay in Dauntless despite her personality. Nobody who was born in Dauntless just left, especially for Amity, the total opposite. But Kate saw her chance to be with more like-minded people, so she picked Amity. She never looked back, although every so often she visits her father, who always complains of her strong fruit smell following her around.

Despite her kindness, however, Dauntless broke her in ways only she knows, and her green eyes hide a sort of bitterness in their sharpness...

Pet: She doesn't have one yet, but she'd love to own one, like a pony or a pig. Some kind of farm animal.

Anything Else Relevant: As said before, she keeps her unnatural hair color by dying it with vegetable juices, she uses turnip juice.

A strong smell of fruits and flowers often follows her, lingering behind in a room long after she's gone because she spends lots of time outside on her farm.

Rainbow is her new name chosen by the people of Amity, but she prefers her old name, Kate.

She has three fears: watching one of her friends die in front of her, wasps, and getting extremely sick.


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

Approved!!! Perfect Kate Rainbow is approved.
"Rainbow"unusual second name


Elizabeth ♛Smart Girls Love Trashy Books♛  (pinkhairedwannabe) | 89 comments Mod
Haha well the people of Amity are modeled after hippies, I know lots of hippies with that name.


message 8: by [deleted user] (last edited Dec 14, 2016 09:09AM) (new)

Elizabeth♥️Everyone Else Has a Super Long Name With a Symbol So I Might as Well Do it Too♥️ wrote: "Haha well the people of Amity are modeled after hippies, I know lots of hippies with that name."

Oh ok. Loved reading your character.


Elizabeth ♛Smart Girls Love Trashy Books♛  (pinkhairedwannabe) | 89 comments Mod
Hopefully we'll get some more characters soon so we can RP!


message 10: by Wolf (Alpha) (last edited Jan 06, 2017 02:24PM) (new)

Wolf (Alpha) - Name: Chelsea Brown
- Gender: Female
- Age: 16
- Faction: Birth: Abnegation, Chosen: Dauntless
- Appearance: - Personality: She is quiet and shy, but makes friends easily. She loves to read and works out quite often. She wants to get a tattoo so she can be more Dauntless than Abnegation. She like to fight and loves pushing her body to the maximum amount.
- History: She was born in Abnegation and had 1 brother who was the same age as she was. When it came time for her to choose which faction she would go to, everyone thought she would choose Abnegation. She choose Dauntless, mostly because she wanted to do more and was not very selfless. Her brother chose to go to Candor, which she was not suprised about. She passed initiation as second in her class and loved every minute of it.
- (Pet): N/A
- Fears: killing her brother, be factionless, dying, and being tortured.


Elizabeth ♛Smart Girls Love Trashy Books♛  (pinkhairedwannabe) | 89 comments Mod
Oooooh I love her! Approved! She could be best friends with Kate!


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