Poetry Writing Contests discussion

Gosh, you have such a way with words it awesome...you're a hella powerful and unique writer. Do you mind me commenting, or would you rather I do it in another thread?

Wow...That is beautiful big bro. You are such a talented poet. Each of your poems are just so heart wrenching, yet they are inspirational. What you do is that you take poetry to a whole other level, and write each word and express it to its full potential. You got talent, my brother. Pure talent. Love you <3

[Hope I'm allowed to comment (:]

Severus~ Jon Snow's brother~Ned Stark's son~Tyrion Lannister is bae~Emilia Clarke, I love you~Game of Thrones is Life~ wrote: "Of course you are allowed to comment Cassie.
And thanks for your.... recognition of my talent. ;)"

Thanks Alby.
And no problem. Every word is true. You truly do have talent ;)

Severus~ Jon Snow's brother~Ned Stark's son~Tyrion Lannister is bae~Emilia Clarke, I love you~Game of Thrones is Life~ wrote: "When You Left Me

All I could do was ask her, “Why have you come back?
Of the time of your absence, I have lost track.
How long has it been? Six months? Or a year?
The weight of my friendship.....w..."

Absolutely beautiful bro :)

Severus~ Jon Snow's brother~Ned Stark's son~Tyrion Lannister is bae~Emilia Clarke, I love you~Game of Thrones is Life~ wrote: " Look at it This Way

Is happiness a truth or just a lie?
It visits us sometimes, just for a while.
Is sadness a truth or just another lie?
It's just a way of viewing things,
The things that pass..."

That's beautiful big bro. Absolutely beautiful

That's beautiful big bro. Absolutely heart wrenching.

Wonderful big bro, really. You have true talent

No problem.



Well, I have used this a couple times, and it's helped a little. Use more metaphors and similes. When you use metaphorical words and similes, your poetry will have a bit more of an even deeper and more abstract meaning to it. It will also help the reader visualize the theme you are trying to exhibit as well as help increase their level of empathy. I'm not sure if you've tried this already, but yeah. XD

Severus~ Jon Snow's brother~Ned Stark's son~Tyrion Lannister is bae~Emilia Clarke, I love you~Game of Thrones is Life~ wrote: "Thoughts of The Future

All of a sudden I thought of the future,
Someday when we'll no longer be together.
"Don't think too much!" I said to the me inside.
"That's what I am supposed to do" is what..."

That's amazing Big bro <3

That's beautiful Alby. Absolutely beautiful <3

That poem literally describes how I feel big bro. You never disappoint with your writing abilities. Excellent job!

Haha you're welcome Alby (-:


Would you mind if we talked on PM, big bro...?

No, why?

Thanks....

Severus~ Jon Snow's brother~Ned Stark's son~Tyrion Lannister is bae~Emilia Clarke, I love you~Game of Thrones is Life~ wrote: "Harley_Granger127~on semi-hiatus~ wrote: "No, why?

Thanks...."


Because my poems aren't that good and you still like them.


Thanks Evelyn"

What are you talking about? Your poems are amazing. WAY better than mine, that's a given fact. What you do is take something extremely heartfelt and turn it into a form of writing. Not many people can do that. And not only that, but you take your poetry to the next level, to a level that professional poets can barely compare to your writing. Don't think your poetry isn't that good, big bro. In all honesty, it's amazing. You truly are a talented poet.

No need to thank me, Alby. You deserve it. You truly are talented

I agree Evelyn...Excellent job big bro!

That's absolutely beautiful big bro.