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'Everyone wants to fly' feedback
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arabella
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Jun 05, 2014 10:14AM
Wow. I loved the way you captured the character's thoughts. He just wanted someone to be nice to him and now he's higher than them. I loved the way you captured it, it flowed like poetry. I loved it.
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