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As I told you before I'm a poet. I've been told that I've made people cry from reading my poems. I'm not sure if it's true. That's for you to tell me.

First attempt at a rhyming poem. I don't know if it's good,but here goes...





Time






Damn time and her keepers.
Damn the weepers.

Time can rhyme and make love stories about quarries, rivers and lakes of tears.

Quivering souls that reach out for life long loves. Mourning doves that provide warning of grief.

Thieves who are time's keepers thief happiness from the weepers.

Time's keepers deluded the weepers into taking Time for granite.

Katniss8112 wrote: "First attempt at a rhyming poem. I don't know if it's good,but here goes...





Time






Damn time and her keepers.
Damn the weepers.

Time can rhyme and make love stories about quarries, river..."




What do you mean you don't know if this is good? This is amazing .