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Jun 02, 2014 12:33PM
(This shall be where I post anything relating to the character Colle Igil [Coil]. Feedback in another topic.)
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Coil was sitting happily. From scavenged parts he had built himself a small computer. With it, he had recently hacked a strangely secure network. It was really rather boring. “Top Secret” Labelled over everything. From his child’s perspective there was nothing important. Nothing interesting. So he was sitting there, leaving contradictory messages on their servers. It passed the time.Two men walked across the darkened land. The sun had long since fallen and the moon hid behind a cloak of clouds. The men carried weapons, and had a strange symbol on their backs. A bee.
Coil slept contentedly as the night passes, his makeshift computer underneath him protectively as he dreamt.
The men wore strange glasses which tinted the landscape green and rendered night’s veil useless. Chains clinked loudly in the chaos as their designated code numbers strived to be known.
Coil turned in his sleep, leaving his precious creation lying beside him, and shedding white light from the screen.
The men approached an unconscious figure; a child. They raised their weapons as they walked towards him, chains clinking in the dark. They soon realised he was asleep, and one simply picks him up gently. The other takes his computer, looks at it, and places it lazily on top of Coil. Within minutes the abduction is over.

