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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

You can post your poems here:)


message 2: by Alan, Epic MOD (new)

Alan | 469 comments Mod
Tech-no-logy
These 'Techs' are without logic
Like a body without a soul
Only it is less tragic


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

wow thats good


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

My experience

Sometimes I feel overly sad and depressed,
My friends all ways tell me not to hang my head,
But when all I want to do is break down and cry,
It is hard to lift my head towards the sky,
They tell me to hold my head up, keep my head up and move on,
But how can I move on when I am so forlorn?
I try as I can and souround myself with people who make me happy,
But others get angry, jelous and crabby,
We have a big fight over the littest of things,
I can no longer stand all the arguing,
So I left and hung out with other people,
People who cared and were happy,
When my 'friend' started a rumor,
Which made me very crabby,
So we almost had another fight,
Untill a good friend intervened,
I did not know that he would try to seek the truth,
I thought he would just ignore me,
So I went and talked to people and got the rumor straightened out,
But just because of something so little I wanted to scream and shout,
I feel like I can not trust people,
My heart filled with doubt,
But I learn't something that day,
Just hold your head up, keep your head up and move on.


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

Sometimes you are going to find someone
whom you can trust
whom makes you feel special
You are going to feel like you mean something to this person
No longer invisable
no longer under the covers of darkness
a shadow that no one sees
you are going to be standing in the light
happy and free:)


message 6: by Alan, Epic MOD (new)

Alan | 469 comments Mod
Bethieluvsrose wrote: "wow thats good"

Thanks!


message 7: by Alan, Epic MOD (new)

Alan | 469 comments Mod
yours awesome!


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

thanks
((oh I invited you to a new group that I could use your assitance with;D))


message 9: by Alan, Epic MOD (new)

Alan | 469 comments Mod
((joined it!))


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

((yay:D))


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

Thank you and Goodbye

One day our journey’s crossed paths

We were the perfect friend for each other

You were like my sunshine over the clouds

We shared the laughs

And the joy we created together

You were there at the tough times

The times I needed you the most

When you were there I was happy

We did everything together

We crossed every river, every trek together

You bought the real me out of myself

And I helped show the world, who you really are

And I knew there was going to be a day

When I had to say goodbye

When our journey together ends

I knew you would not leave any contact behind

But I want to say thanks

For being there for me

For accepting who I am

For having a shoulder to cry on

But now we've chosen our ways

And our journey together ends



So now I say thank you and goodbye my friend


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

That is beautiful:)


message 13: by [deleted user] (last edited Jul 03, 2014 10:30PM) (new)

thanks


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

She dreamed of blood and sweat and tears
Her everyday life now haunted her dreams
Too many thoughts with in her head
Colliding with each other making her see red
Her heart turned black as the darkest coal
Tearing to pieces no longer whole
Her pain she wore upon her face
Showing her scars as they were traced
But no one gave her a second glance
Except for one person whom she met by chance
He broke down her barricade
And told her to focus on the now and not the yesterday
She was suddenly happy and smiled and felt fine
But little did she know it would fade with time
The darkness in her heart never truly faded
The pain on her face never truly dissipated
So now she struggles on her own

Never truly finding her way home.


message 15: by [deleted user] (new)

I can't breathe
I am suffocating
Struggling to break away
From the demon that's inside of me
So much fear shows on my face
As I collapse on the ground
Wishing that I could end this
The pain and the struggle
The fight within
That I wish had never had to begin


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

I Feel

I feel like I am about to explode inside
I feel like I am about to cry
I feel like I am trapped
I feel like I can't relax
I feel like I want to jump around
I feel like I want to punch the ground
I feel like I want to get rid of this hurt
I feel like I am sick of feeling like dirt
I feel like the world is against me
I feel like I will be alone for eternity
I feel like there are so many things I can't hide
I feel like I will never touch the sky
I feel like I can never be the same
I feel like I am going insane
I feel like a thousand rocks lie on me
I feel like the pressure is killing me
I feel like I am hidden under darkness
I feel like I am always upset
I feel like I can't trust anyone
I feel like I am done
I feel like I can't take anymore of life
I feel like I can't take anymore strife
I feel like I am going to lose
I feel like things are not going so smooth


message 17: by [deleted user] (new)

War
You stay in your cage, a whirling, swirling storm
Gunshots hit cold metal, memories shatter
I can’t quite make you out
You’re hiding at the eye of the storm, cackling

Now and then though, someone comes tiptoeing by
They are tempted by your ‘simple solution’
Black, rotting key comes out
Key enters lock, realization hits, too late

Out you come, dark shadow on steel chariot
Your horses dive forward, thirsty for chaos
Their teeth gleam like silver
There is nothing to stop your reign of terror

Gunshots fire, swords clash, desperation cries out
Your seeds of discourse have finally come loose
And then I spot a child
Coming towards you with innocent hands reached out

You stop momentarily, our fate lingers
The child touches you, light meeting dark
You start to disappear
Now all that’s left of you is a memory


message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

that is great Tumbling:)


message 19: by [deleted user] (new)

Their great poems Beth and Tumbling


message 20: by [deleted user] (new)

Potato
Potato
P-O-T-A-T-O
Potato.


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

Mamie wrote: "Potato
Potato
P-O-T-A-T-O
Potato."


whooo!my new favourite found!


message 22: by [deleted user] (new)

Thank you.


message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

I LOVE POTATO!!!


message 24: by [deleted user] (new)

Potato is friend.


message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

Definitely


message 26: by Kaylin Behrens, NEW MOD!!! (new)

Kaylin Behrens | 332 comments Mod
lol guys

My friends platypi one was better.... funnier


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