Write Your Heart Out ツ discussion

during everyday life we all encounter many problems and might be put into really tough situations.
I write about these things, and just phrase them into quotes, and sometimes writings.
Most of the things here are written by me, so i would like to have your feedback about anything.
THANKS!

'' Far people are as close as close people who are far"

" Those who don't think much run away from new beginnings. That's why people vanish when it rains these days"

"what life had once been is in a grave burried side by side to what would have been"

"you can't change the ocean's colour without changing the sky's "

" some people are wise for they could get you out of a hole. Others are wiser for they could get you out of a well"

"the top of the mountain is where it ends... and where we begin"

"there's no one wiser than a tree"

" Some dead people are souls starving for life.
Many living people are bodies looking for souls"

" what a pity it is to love someone who doesn't care about you.. what's really weird is when you forget about him when he starts loving you.. HUMAN BEINGS!"

" Sometimes situations get tough and you feel like crying, so you try to remember a happy moment.
You don't.
Again, you try to remember.
You don't.
You cry, but now because of wasted time and regret !"

" The grass declares it's green..
The sky claims it's wide..
The earth thinks that ends it has none..
"I'm blazing" believes the sun..
And I am human and i will believe none..
Neither the whole world nor the sun..
And no weapon nor gun
will get my heart to fright,
for i will fight! fight ! fight!
and you surrender and lose might,
and give me back my human rights..."

"They told me to cry..
They told me not to..
They told me to suppress it..
They told me to show it..
They knew i am human,
They just didn't believe it..
They knew i was in pain,
They just didn't feel it..
So i silently exploded.."

My Lost Beloved



Two months had passed since the death of my beloved.
Two torturing, provoking, agonizing months!
My heart had been slowly ripped out of chest, and the ribs cracked off my cage.
I certainly knew not if this would last a whole century or an age.
Oh, so quickly I inhaled that night in search of a mist my lover had breathed out before
until there was no breath my lungs hadn't ever bore.
Then I felt my eyes sparkle and my tears twinkle cascading on either my face's sides
for I felt my lovers touch and hearkened to the precious voice,
but Reality whispered: '' She died''.
Oh, the sorrow I felt , the future I feared can never be known
to any human being without hearing his faintest groan !
She's now a soul in the sky, a princess of the moon's.
She's the only thought I ponder on when enjoying spring's tunes.
But she'll always have in my heart a
shrine,
where she'll breathe and live and always be mine.
I will forgive her for her ghastly falseness
for I never knew Death had lips , which led to treason that's endless..
But now I wish Death would touch and kiss my damp cheek,
and take me with her to the cherished lover I always seek.
Take me to heaven if you like. Take me to hell..
for I care not for anything now except for the beauty I adore so well!

those are really great quotes! I haven't heard most of them...

I wrote them.
the first comment says that "i write quotes".
I wrote everything here.
glad you liked them:)

thanks for your feedback ;) :)

Good Job

yep:)

Wow,these are marvellous. Specially this one and
the last three. Aussie wrote: ""you can't change the ocean's colour without changing the sky's ""

Wow, Aussie... These are really beautiful writings. I agree with Anahita, those are the most beautiful ones. Keep writing, I enjoyed them all :)

thank you for your feedback! I really appreciate it. it might take me some time to write more, because these things happen in daily life , and it takes time for them to happen :) these writings are results of two years of life experience. ( hey, i'm only 16:))

lol yeah

" some people are as clear as mud"

"Shame on you humans.. you even made nature cry!"

"sad people are like flowers...they bloom each day by day IF they have friends"

It pains to know that, as children,
we didn't need beauty to have a beautiful day,
we didn't need perfection to live a perfect life,
we didn't need happiness to be happy,
we didn't need satisfaction to satisfy our curiousities!

All we needed was imagination!

And now, the immortal monster of time and age , which feeds on life's hardships, has turned us into beggars.. beggars for happiness, beauty, satisfaction, and perfection!

that's so true. I like your honest quotes-
I'm only fifteen, and yet all these points you've made have taken place in my life. how sad

that's just a part of getting older and more experienced. it wouldn't be sad if you look at the bright side of life constantly, and believe me: it's ALWAYS there. You still have a whole life ahead of you ! ENJOY!
:D

Lol of course :)

just like staring at a midnight sky, and realising the presence of more and more stars as you stare, when you open your eyes wide, and will to realise people,you will discover either the beauty or the ugliness of their souls.

life is so odd that sometimes leaving something you hate makes you love it!

its beautiful to have someone who misses you when you're away, and wishes that it wouldn't be the last time he sees you when you meet:)

some people are roses growing in the same garden as you, only they still havent bloomed.

"peace is the war against war".

" Before love, you are something..
When in love, you are everything..
After love, well, you are.. nothing"

" life is but a little flame.. if you blow it off, it would never be the same.."

..قبل الحب انت شيئ"
..عند الحب انت كل شيئ
" ... و بعد الحب انت لا شيئ

''philosophically , revenge is just like biting a dog, because it bit you!''

''love is an action, not a word''

"lightning is the reluctance of day and the confidence of night"

" spending your life trying is never a waist.. it's experience "

this is a quote I love by Einstein " if a cluttered desk is a sign of a cluttered mind, of what then is an empty desk a sign? "

'' if you cant explain it simply, you don't understand it well enough'' -einstein

Had I lived on a land far..far away..
Would I have felt happiness or dismay?

" the only thing we should fear is FEAR itself" -- Roosevelt

When people leave, they sometimes lose their souls on the way back... how heartless!