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Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~
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Ahhh Hayden I'm so excited to read more of your writing again!! This story is really brilliant, I love the structure of it & how you incorporated so much history into it and it feels so natural and believable. There are so many beautiful details. I loved it so much!






A look into the life and self-discovery of a man named Patrick in eight parts.
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I'm back to post a short story! I took a creative writing class this semester and I wrote this and it went over really well and now I'm just in that process of tweaking it and whatnot, so getting any feedback would be much appreciated.