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message 1: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments 1978

A look into the life and self-discovery of a man named Patrick in eight parts.

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I'm back to post a short story! I took a creative writing class this semester and I wrote this and it went over really well and now I'm just in that process of tweaking it and whatnot, so getting any feedback would be much appreciated.


Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~ | 3061 comments Can't wait to look at this as soon as my life gets a little less crazy!


message 3: by Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. (new)

Brigid ✩ | 11973 comments Mod
Ahhh Hayden I'm so excited to read more of your writing again!! This story is really brilliant, I love the structure of it & how you incorporated so much history into it and it feels so natural and believable. There are so many beautiful details. I loved it so much!


message 4: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Thank you!!


message 5: by Mindy (new)

Mindy Diamond | 190 comments Oh G-d this is too good. Like literary magazine good. Amazing, would love to read more.


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