Support for Indie Authors discussion

So guys I got some feedback from some people on my previous cover upload. I asked my artists to incorporate the changes that people suggested. This is what they did. Please tell me what you think.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/tcyh1o6scam...

I have to post it as a link to my dropbox account because I don't know how to put it in the thread.

Hi Blaque - I have (hopefully) dropped a copy of your cover into the thread itself, in case that helps when people come to review the changes.



I think the title is now a lot clearer to read, with just the one colour being used. I'm afraid that I am still not madly keen on the "volume 2" typeface myself, but that is a matter of personal opinion :)

I think the cover design looks clean and the text can be clearly read (which are two of the most important things, in my opinion).

Sorry, another thought: I've just gone back to the original cover thread and that cover had a subtitle of "volume 1". This version says "volume 2".

Just wanted to mention it in case that change wasn't intentional.

Thanks john. I appreciate the input.

Yes, I like this better.

Thanks jacqueline for your input.