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message 1: by Kylie (new)

Kylie old run down theme park- can be dangerous.


message 2: by Deanna, *nice one* (new)

Deanna (deannakc) | 4357 comments Mod
Carwen runs into the Park not knowing where else to go. She glances around to see old rides rusty and lifeless. Carwen sees a small alcove and takes cover behind it.


message 3: by Finn (new)

Finn X follows Carwen to an abandoned theme park where she hid.


message 4: by Deanna, *nice one* (new)

Deanna (deannakc) | 4357 comments Mod
She sighs and slumps against the wall. Breathing in big gulps of air. She stood again knowing she had to keep moving.


message 5: by Finn (new)

Finn X went to approach her, when his phone began vibrating in his pocket. Quickly he swept it out of his pocket before the noise alerted Carwen. He quietly slipped behind a ride and watched as she started away again.


message 6: by Deanna, *nice one* (new)

Deanna (deannakc) | 4357 comments Mod
Carwen's head whips around when she hears something. Her eyes squint as she tries to find it's source. She sees nothing. Shaking her head she moves close to another ride and hides behind the huge poll.


message 7: by Finn (new)

Finn X listens to the words of Seb, who is on the other side of the phone.
((Hi are you going to act as Seb?))


message 8: by Deanna, *nice one* (new)

Deanna (deannakc) | 4357 comments Mod
((YA))

"Okay listen closely and listen good." Seb sneered into the phone. "There is a girl who used to live at our camp that needs to be dealt with." He laughed coldly. "Her name is Carwen, she's short with red hair. If you get rid of her I will give you everything you've ever wished for." He snarled.


message 9: by Finn (new)

Finn X's face darkened as he listened to Seb. He whispered into the phone so that Carwen, on the other side of the theme park wouldn't hear him. "Like what?"


message 10: by Deanna, *nice one* (new)

Deanna (deannakc) | 4357 comments Mod
"Knowledge." Seb chuckled wickedly. "About everything, your past, family and so, so much more." Seb breathed deeply. "So what do you say? A life for yours?"


message 11: by Finn (new)

Finn X felt the temptation rise up within him and he quietly agreed, "It's done."


message 12: by Deanna, *nice one* (new)

Deanna (deannakc) | 4357 comments Mod
"Excellent." Seb rasped into the phone. Then the line went dead.

~

Carwen felt her nerves kick up a notch. Her paranoia almost consuming her.


message 13: by Finn (new)

Finn X dropped the phone on the floor by his feet and stepped out from behind his cover. Starting towards his soon to be victim.


message 14: by Deanna, *nice one* (new)

Deanna (deannakc) | 4357 comments Mod
Carwen shudders as she hears a thump a few feet away. She drops her bag and climbs onto the Rolla Costas frame. She flips up it easily and quietly.


message 15: by Finn (new)

Finn X approaches the ride Carwen was hiding behind, but realised she was no longer there. He waited for a sound that would indicate where she was hiding.


message 16: by Deanna, *nice one* (new)

Deanna (deannakc) | 4357 comments Mod
Viper looks down and is surprised to see X standing there. She feels like her blood ices over and she tries to stay as still as possible, until the ride creeks from under her feet. Her eyes widen and she jumps off of the ride like a monkey.


message 17: by Finn (new)

Finn X locks gazes with Carwen and slowly turns his whole body around to face her.


message 18: by Deanna, *nice one* (new)

Deanna (deannakc) | 4357 comments Mod
Carwen panics and almost falls off of the ride. She quickly moves not letting her eyes stray from his. She knew she was staring it the face of her killer.


message 19: by Finn (new)

Finn Sensing her fear and knowledge that she knew what he was going to do, X approached her cautiously.
((I'm going to have a shower but I'll be really quick!))


message 20: by Deanna, *nice one* (new)

Deanna (deannakc) | 4357 comments Mod
((OKAY! Be back don't leave me hanging ;) ))

Like a trapped animal she stumbled backwards off of the Rolla Costa, She tumbled and rolled landing her fall perfectly. Seeing him walking towards her slowly she ran. And ran.


message 21: by Finn (new)

Finn X watched her take flight and took chase, weaving between all the rides to try and catch her.


message 22: by Deanna, *nice one* (new)

Deanna (deannakc) | 4357 comments Mod
She turned and saw him gaining on her. She was so scared. It was either run or die and it was most likely going to be the latter.


message 23: by Finn (new)

Finn With a powerful leap from his back legs, X fluently reached up his shirt and revealed a wicked looking dagger. At the same time, capturing Carwen's waist with his arm and dragging her to the floor.


message 24: by Deanna, *nice one* (new)

Deanna (deannakc) | 4357 comments Mod
Carwen screamed and tried to struggle out from under him. She kicked and bucked against him but he was like an unmoveable force. Tears streamed down her cheeks as she looked into his soulless eyes. "I preferred it when you were making jokes." She say quietly still struggling.


message 25: by Finn (new)

Finn X stared into her eyes, but she refused to meet his gaze. He began to bring his dagger down to end her life, but at that moment her eyes flickered to meet his. His hand stopped just in time.


message 26: by Deanna, *nice one* (new)

Deanna (deannakc) | 4357 comments Mod
The dagger was against her heart, so close, so, so close. They stared at each other, Carwen was shaking and she swallowed hard against the lump in her throat. Her breathing was ragged and she had gone limp against the ground.


message 27: by Finn (new)

Finn X's face was so close to hers and her said to her "I will take you to the good camp."


message 28: by Deanna, *nice one* (new)

Deanna (deannakc) | 4357 comments Mod
"W-Wh- What?" She managed to stutter out of her chattering jaw.


message 29: by Finn (new)

Finn X narrowed his eyes and warned "don't run." As he began to stand up.


message 30: by Deanna, *nice one* (new)

Deanna (deannakc) | 4357 comments Mod
Carwen shuffled backwards as he stood because in his hand he still held the dagger.


message 31: by Finn (new)

Finn X took in her terrified form and repeated "I'm going to take you to the good camp."


message 32: by Deanna, *nice one* (new)

Deanna (deannakc) | 4357 comments Mod
Carwen looked him over, she was still sceptical of him. She cleared her dry throat. "Why? What's in it for you?" She questioned


message 33: by Finn (new)

Finn X just raised an eyebrow and flipped the dagger in the air, catching it by the hilt.


message 34: by Deanna, *nice one* (new)

Deanna (deannakc) | 4357 comments Mod
Carwen shuffles back a bit more, until her back hits one of the supports for the rides. "That, that's not really helping my trust issues." She said always the smart mouth, even in deadly situations.


message 35: by Finn (new)

Finn X walked towards her as she had no place left to go. He sighed and said "You can't go back to the bad camp because they will kill you. You also can't stay here, because I will kill you."


message 36: by Deanna, *nice one* (new)

Deanna (deannakc) | 4357 comments Mod
Her body shakes as he stalks closer. She quickly grabs the poll and flips her body up it. "If you want me to go with you don't threaten to kill me." She says softly though she knew he heard it.

((SORRY! My thing didn't post))


message 37: by Finn (new)

Finn ((That's ok! I've got to go in a minute sorry!))
X suddenly sprang from the ground and stabbed the dagger into her leg.


message 38: by Deanna, *nice one* (new)

Deanna (deannakc) | 4357 comments Mod
Carwen's mouth opens to scream but nothing come out. She slips from her position on the support and falls to the ground with a thud. Her head hit the ground and her eyes closed. "Thought you wanted to take me to the good camp."


message 39: by Finn (new)

Finn X lent down and picked her limp form up in his arms. "I am" he grumbled "you forced me to take drastic action!"
((Sorry I've got to go now!))


message 40: by Deanna, *nice one* (new)

Deanna (deannakc) | 4357 comments Mod
((Bye Bye))

"You should have just said please because violence isn't always the solution." She said while wincing through the pain burning in her legs. "If I die I'm coming back to haunt you." She whispered softly and pointed a feeble finger at him. Carwen passed out cold in his arms.


message 41: by Finn (new)

Finn X sighed and adjusted her weight in his arms, carrying her out the theme park.


message 42: by Deanna, *nice one* (new)

Deanna (deannakc) | 4357 comments Mod
((Infirmary, Good camp?))


message 43: by Finn (new)

Finn ((already posted ;)))


message 44: by [deleted user] (new)

Chloe walked along the tracks from the old roller coaster until she reached the peek just be for the drop. She stood there and watched as the sun set. "That's pretty." She said to no one or at lest no one alive. she smiled, " this was a good idea." After the sun set she just stood there and watched the sky waiting for the moon to come. It was going to be a blood moon, she had been waiting for a blood moon for along time. These kinds of moons were special at lest they were to her.


₦łӾØ₦ ฿Ⱡ₳₵₭₥Ø₦Đ Chester couldn't believe it. Chloe stood in front of him, her back to him as she looked out towards the horizon. "It is." he said with a smile as he ran a hand through his bright red hair. "And it was a good idea."


message 46: by [deleted user] (new)

Chloe spun quickly she had not heard anyone come up behind her "it can't be." Her smile brightened "Chester!" Chloe had not expected to see anyone especially not Chester "why are you here? You know what I don't care I can believe that your here!" She ran up and hugged him.


₦łӾØ₦ ฿Ⱡ₳₵₭₥Ø₦Đ Chester hated hugs, but welcomed her into his arms. The things he did for kids were unbelievable. "How you been kiddo?" he asked rubbing her head with his hand as he smiled at her. Chester was glad that she seemed to be doing okay.


message 48: by [deleted user] (new)

"I've been fine all those wounds have closed, what about you?" Chloe let him go and looked up at him with a big smile. "Why did you come here to night? I came for the blood moon."


₦łӾØ₦ ฿Ⱡ₳₵₭₥Ø₦Đ Chester looked into the sky, "The blood moon huh?" he said as if he could see it there. "Needed out of there again." he chuckled. Chester always needed out of there for air and space. Sometimes it was just too much.


message 50: by [deleted user] (new)

"That's boring I was hoping that you came for it too oh well. I'm still glad that you came though" Chloe looked back to the sky, " at lest you get to see a blood moon most people don't care or never see one. Have you ever seen one?" She looked back at him and waited for an answer.


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