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message 1: by Allie (new)


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

Red glared. She began to sink. She kicked her feet. Trying to stay. Why!!


message 3: by Allie (new)

Allie Pinto He laughed, diving down and pulling her up with one hand so shed floated. "Try this" he said as he motioned how to use your arms to swim, spreading the water apart and kicking.


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

"I know! I know how! Okay? I'll show you!" She hissed and glared at him. Then slowly tried his suggestion. .


message 5: by Allie (new)

Allie Pinto A satisfied smile crawled onto his face as he saw the girl wiggle and flop her way forward, at least she was moving he thought. Out of the depts. came a shark, menacing and black eyed he began to circle the girl


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

Red froze instantly. But then began to squirm as she struggled to stay up. She felt the hark get closer and closer and soon a small yet high pitched scream left her mouth. The earth began to shake once again and the waves of the beach became bigger.


message 7: by Allie (new)

Allie Pinto Elio began to laugh, calling the shark back to its side and scratching its belly like it was a dog. "See, saved your life again" he teased, shaking his head "what am I going to do with a litte girl that can't even swim" he said, smiling to shark


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

Red became very red. With embarrassment... With anger. Tears welled up in her eyes and she still struggled to stay up. What a complete jerk!!


message 9: by Allie (new)

Allie Pinto Finally after watching the girl struggle he swam over to her again, wrapping one arm around her waist he kicked up towards the surface. As they reached the air his gills melted back into his skin, the sea animals left his side and he looked at her, taking away the bubble "you could have just said you couldn't swim" he said simply a small smile on his face "but n, you had to be all stubborn and I had to come to the rescue"


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

She tried to squirm away from him. "You are a butt!" She declared. "I can swim!!"


message 11: by Allie (new)

Allie Pinto Shaking his head again, he finally came to realize something "hey? where am I gonna crash?" he asked himself, slowly loosening the grip on the girls waist.


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

"H-hey!!" She gasped and clung to him. Face white with fear. "Hotel! There's a hotel!" She yelled


message 13: by Allie (new)

Allie Pinto "Nah, I want a more permanent crash pad, somewhere excluded" he drummed his fingers on his chin "i'll look later" he said simply, his stomach growled "wanna get some grub?" he asked


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

"Please... They have been starving me... I'm mean!" She laughed slightly


message 15: by Allie (new)

Allie Pinto He smirked back, "well, then I guess we our going to the fanciest restaurant in town, ordering everything off the menu and then ditching before the waiter comes back with the bill" he said as he looped his arm around her waist and pulled her back onto dry land


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

"Okay.." She twirled her hair out wathing as the water hit the ground. She sighed. "Sounds good"


message 17: by Allie (new)

Allie Pinto ((I'll post at the Diner))


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