The Friendly Book Cave 2020 discussion

Put all of your energy into this. You must write a good descriptive piece of poem. You might be the next Thomas Hardy.

Crept down in violets - stars are rising.
hunger eats the ball of gas so it no longer is shining
calm- serene- think- flying,
gently in the cool glow.

Moon goes up and sky is purple
water drinks and blows it's own bubble
lust for once engulfing double
anatomy is wet as it flows.

Creep down in violet
Hunger eats the stars as it rose
It's a ball of gas

It's no way longer
Think it's shining calm and serene
Gently flying in

Moon goes and cool glows
The sky is purple water
It drinks and it blows

Lusts of our bubbles
engulfing double-double
It's anatomy

It's wet as it flows
it is wetting as it grows
it's wet as it gflows

I Found Neverland
I found Neverland,
In the palm of your hands.
You held it out to me,
A gift that we would forever share.
I wrapped my fingers around yours,
And said that “as long as I had you,
I’d be forever young”.
And I pointed to your chest,
Then to mine,
And said,
“My Neverland is with you,
My Neverland doesn’t have eternal youth.
Well, maybe it does,
But of a different kind.”
I found Neverland that day,
Our hands entwined,
Our lips gently brushing.
Time forever stopped,
We did it together.
In this Neverland,
Though we cannot fly,
We soar as far as our souls will take us.
I found Neverland,
The day you asked me to be yours forever.
We danced until the sun went down,
Then we smiled at each other,
Laughing at each other,
Knowing that it would always get better.
I found Neverland,
Oh yes,
I did find it.
It wasn’t the second star to the right,
Nor was it even in the sky.
It was with you,
My beloved.
I know that we are young,
But that’s how some love is.
Our souls are connected,
Entwined together by powers unknown.
We found our Neverland,
The moment we met each other.
You are my Peter,
And I’m your Lost Boy.
Together we go on adventures,
The others trailing soon behind.
You know,
It’s hard to believe that we could ever get on with life,
Because when I’m with you,
Nothing else matters.
I found Neverland,
When I found you.
You brighten my day with your smile,
Your sweet kisses ever so gentle,
I’m your fragile china doll
(actually, I’m really hard to break),
And you hold me like I’m your baby.
I found Neverland,
Just me and you.
Let’s be spontaneous,
Do whatever we want to.
We’ll explore the vast woods,
Swim the deep blue sea,
We’ll do it all together,
Me and you.
‘Cuz you’re my Peter,
You’re my all.
I’m your little Lost Boy,
The one that’s actually your girl.
I found Neverland,
And it all began with just me and you.

Dreams of You
When we say goodbye each day,
I know it will never be our last.
Because each night as I dream,
You come to me.
You whisper into my ear just before I fall asleep,
You hold my hand and tuck away my hair.
It’s as if a phantom you is beside me,
Helping me through those hard moments.
Those moments when I can’t sleep,
Those moments when I don’t feel all too well.
As I face the wall before I close my eyes,
I can feel a hand just over both of mine.
These must be dreams of you,
Surely and truly no one can do such things?
And yet you were there,
Even though you were back at your house.
I guess I must have been dreaming,
But it felt all so real to me.
In some ways I hoped it was.
In my dreams,
Sometimes we dance.
Other times we’re just sitting together,
And then sometimes we relive the earlier mornings.
Each day brings a new night,
And each night contains a dream of you.
Nothing too fancy,
But each day lights up each night,
And we share those moments we can’t do in the morning.
Each night contains new surprises,
Both the moments we share in the day,
And new experiences in the night.
Sometimes the moments are intimate,
Other times we just talk.
Sometimes we walk on the beach,
Sometimes we dance under moonlight.
Sometimes we’re spontanious,
Other times we plan our actions.
Most of the time we let thing be,
Knowing that we’re all we need.
My dreams of you are sweet,
They help me know you’re always there,
No matter when or where.
My whole world cirlces around you,
We fly together,
We dive deep into the things we call life.
You and me,
We’re meant to be.
Because in my dreams of you,
If we weren’t meant to be-
Then you would have never met me.
You see, time stops when I’m around you,
You brighten my day up,
You listen and care about what I say.
You don’t mind when I play those games,
Because no matter what,
I always let you win.
Some people say life’s a joke-
Well, they have yet to learn.
The joke is on them,
Because they didn’t play the game.
My dreams of you,
They make all my wishes come true.
But nothing is as good as the real thing,
Sitting right next to me,
A smile on your face,
Knowing that we are meant to be.

This is what I'm working on in my class.

Sylveon~Raven wrote: "This is what I'm working on in my class."

Love it

Poems are difficult but its for creative writing

Do you like my songs?

Yeah

Here's a poem I am working on for class


My feelings are glass
They break
Dropped carelessly on the hardwood floor
They shatter
Scattered across
Dangerous pieces
Poking from the ground
Threatening to stab those who walk around
Replaced
Lost
Disgraced
Pieces so small
you can never repair
Lost deep down
Bent to be forgotten
Swept up with despair
But if you show you care
Then I will hold the things you like
Secrets that you want
Things you need

Is good, and seems to have a bit of a depressing tone to it.

:D

That is what you meant for it right?

Depends on how it seems. The ending is definantly happy

Yea, I have to agree with you on that.

Much as you blame yourself
You can't be blamed for the way that you feel
Had no example of a love that was even remotely real

How can you understand something that you never had?
If you let me, I can help you out with all of that

I can see the pain behind your eyes
It's been there for quite a while
I just want to be the one to remind you what it is to smile

I would like to show you what true love can really do

For every heart that beats
Heart that beats

Let me love you
And I will love you
Until you learn to love yourself
I know your trouble
Don't be afraid, let me help
A heart of numbness, gets brought to life
I'll take you there

Let me love you
Let me love you once again.