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lorien ‧͙⁺˚*・༓ଳ | 403 comments Mod
Where Lydia shall post her characters!


message 2: by lorien ‧͙⁺˚*・༓ଳ (last edited Nov 14, 2017 01:33PM) (new)

lorien ‧͙⁺˚*・༓ଳ | 403 comments Mod
Here are a few things:

You haven't completed her appearance yet. Include a full written out description of her and add in hair color and what she looks like as a whole.
Please bold Name, Age, Level, etc. Does she not have a last name? Or is she better known as Luthiel? Her abilities wouldn't come naturally by something triggering it to occur, or someone training her in that ability. It can happen at any time.
If you can fix these changes, then I'll take a look at her again and see if she can be approved. :-)


message 3: by lorien ‧͙⁺˚*・༓ଳ (last edited Nov 14, 2017 01:54PM) (new)

lorien ‧͙⁺˚*・༓ଳ | 403 comments Mod
To make the words bold, do this: <.b>Name<./b>Except without the periods.

Could you also add what she wears daily? A shawl? Cloak? What kind of pants? Etc.

How old was she when her parents were killed? And why were they killed? It doesn't have to be something Luthiel knows, just so we can get a better idea of her background. :-)


lorien ‧͙⁺˚*・༓ଳ | 403 comments Mod
Approved.


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