Urban Fantasy discussion

I welcome feedback (positive or negative). Obviously, my primary concern is whether it's hooky or not?

With great power comes… a whole lotta trouble

My name is Gabriel Ward. A year ago I woke up in the smoldering rubble of my apartment. No burns. No cuts or bruises. No memory of what the heck happened.
Then, a guy who could give Methuselah a run for his money dumps another bucket of weird on me. Turns out, most of the things I thought were merely myths are real — and I’m one of them.
An Heir.
It’s not what you’d think. No trust fund. No deed to a charming fixer-upper. Just a crazy story and a front row seat to an eternal war.
I’d call BS on it but for the magic. Cool, right?
Yeah, sure, until a diabolical douche starts playing puppet master with mortal souls and that magic puts me in the thick of it.
With earthly authorities in over their heads, and unearthly authorities screwing around with their own agenda, it’s up to me to stop it. My only chance is embracing my heritage at whatever the cost. Because if I fail, the city will become a demonic Ellis Island. Then the sulfur will really hit the fan…

I would read the book from this blurb. It has an almost inappropriate fringe vibe going on that piques my interest.

Haha I love it! It held my interest from the beginning. And great ending line, by the way; it made me laugh 👍

Got my attention!

This is really cool. Thanks for sharing it. If u turn it into a book please please please pick me to review it

Love this blurb! Has a really great hook to it. I would just suggest maybe being a little less vague in places. Can you give us a bit more about what an Heir is? What type of magic is involved? Just something like that.

But great otherwise :)

Sounds awesome. Interesting premise.