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message 1: by Julia (new)

Julia


message 2: by Mimi 'Pans' (new)

Mimi 'Pans' Herondale Kiara opened her eyes slowly and painfully. One of her eyes was full of sand. She tried to sit up but cried out in pain. She glanced at her arm and sighed, it was hanging in a crooked angle. It was broken.


message 3: by Julia (new)

Julia Jazmyn woke up to a searing pain. That was the first sign something was wrong. The second was the blurry vision. She blinked, and blinked again, and again until it began to clear.
The plane... dear god, it was torn in two, people were passed out in the seat. She turned her head to look at Amanda, her friend. Amanda’s head was lolled, there was a metal shard sticking out of her neck.
Jazmyn began to scream and fumble with her seat belt.


message 4: by Mimi 'Pans' (new)

Mimi 'Pans' Herondale Kiara heard a scream from somewhere inside the plane. "Hello?" she called out, her throat parched. That was when she saw the first dead body. It was her teacher, blood was all over her face and her face was contorted in pain. She screamed and screamed and screamed until she was out of breath.


message 5: by TheRavenpuffWhovian, Creator of the TARDIS (new)

TheRavenpuffWhovian (strawberryprince) | 52 comments Mod
(can I join in?)


message 6: by Mimi 'Pans' (new)

Mimi 'Pans' Herondale ((i don't mind, who is your character?))


message 7: by Julia (new)

Julia Jazmyn finally got out of her seat, she stood up and nearly passed out. She dropped to her knees, blood dripping from her forehead. There were others screaming. So much screaming. She was almost a senior, she had to help. She hauled her self up with on hand while the other hung limply at her side. She looked around for the other screamer.


message 8: by Julia (new)

Julia ((Go ahead, as many characters as you want)


message 9: by Mimi 'Pans' (new)

Mimi 'Pans' Herondale Kiara stopped screaming enough to get a breath of air.


message 10: by TheRavenpuffWhovian, Creator of the TARDIS (new)

TheRavenpuffWhovian (strawberryprince) | 52 comments Mod
Mimi wrote: "((i don't mind, who is your character?))"

Full Name: Jayden Leonard Perry

Nickname (optional): Jay

Age: 14

date of birth (optional): April 16, 2004

Height: 5'4

Weight: 91 pounds

appearance: https://chippersworld.deviantart.com/... Except, he always wears a leather jacket.

injuries: Left eye blinded by a shard of glass, right forearm broken

Likes: leather jackets, music

Dislikes: most foods, the cold

Strengths: resourceful and crafty, smart

Weaknesses: weak, undernourished, even before the crash


message 11: by Mimi 'Pans' (new)

Mimi 'Pans' Herondale ((kk. great.))


message 12: by Julia (new)

Julia Jazmyn spotted Kiara and walked over to her, almost in a trance. “A-Are... are you okay?” Jazmyn blinked blood from her eye.


message 13: by Mimi 'Pans' (new)

Mimi 'Pans' Herondale Kiara looked up at the other girl above her. She blinked once, "Uh, not really." she answered. "But I bet you are even worse of that me."


message 14: by TheRavenpuffWhovian, Creator of the TARDIS (new)

TheRavenpuffWhovian (strawberryprince) | 52 comments Mod
Jayden opened his eyes and realized only one of them was open. Actually, they were both open, but his left eye was cut, a glass shard still stuck into it. He panicked and tried to pull it out, but he realized his right forearm was broken. It looked very weird because he could move his elbow up and down, but not the rest of it. He quickly tore the glass from his eye and then looked at Jazmyn and Kiara.


message 15: by Mimi 'Pans' (new)

Mimi 'Pans' Herondale Kiara turned to the boy and began screaming all over again because there was blood all over his face and it was coming from his eye.


message 16: by TheRavenpuffWhovian, Creator of the TARDIS (new)

TheRavenpuffWhovian (strawberryprince) | 52 comments Mod
"Don't worry, it's okay! I just need to..." He cut out a strip of his shirt with the glass shard and tied it around his head like an eyepatch. "It'll be fine! This is what I need to worry about!" He pointed to his right arm.


message 17: by Julia (new)

Julia “Okay, okay!” Jazmyn stumbled backward, “Shut up, calm down!” She shrieked at them, “you, kid... um... jay? Can you get out of your seat? And you, kiara, get out of yours.” She whispered. Get away from the wreckage. That was first and fore most, then deal with injuries.


message 18: by Julia (new)

Julia ((We should come up with an order of reply))


message 19: by TheRavenpuffWhovian, Creator of the TARDIS (new)

TheRavenpuffWhovian (strawberryprince) | 52 comments Mod
(I actually need to go, I didn't think I had to, but I do! Sorry bout that!)


message 20: by Mimi 'Pans' (new)

Mimi 'Pans' Herondale (( it's fine i will have to go soon as well))

Kiara stopped her screaming, but soon after began to sob. "I can't," she told the other girl and pointed to her right arm. "It's my right, and I am right handed."


message 21: by Julia (new)

Julia ((That’s fine, dude))


message 22: by Julia (new)

Julia “It’s a seat belt, use your left hand. You have to try.” She whispered.


message 23: by Mimi 'Pans' (new)

Mimi 'Pans' Herondale Kiara fumbled with the seat belt for a few moments trying to get it open. After about fifteen minutes she managed it and stood up only to fall back down onto the seat, her head spinning.


message 24: by Julia (new)

Julia “C’mon,” Jazmyn pulled her up with her one good hand and slung the girls arms around her shoulder.

(We should wait for Hufflepuff to get back))


message 25: by lorena (new)

lorena | 72 comments ((Can I join?))


message 26: by Julia (new)

Julia Yah! Huddle puff can be the silent person following from behinf))


message 27: by Mimi 'Pans' (new)

Mimi 'Pans' Herondale ((sure. and okay, we can wait i probably have to go soon so...))

"Thanks," Kiara managed to say. She was too busy trying not to pass out


message 28: by Julia (new)

Julia (Okay... then we wait :) ))


message 29: by lorena (last edited Apr 07, 2018 02:31PM) (new)

lorena | 72 comments ((ok))


message 30: by lorena (last edited Apr 07, 2018 02:37PM) (new)

lorena | 72 comments Lorelai opened her eyes. The first thing she saw was bodies..... everywhere. "I hope they aren't dead" she muttered. Her brain then immediately went and thought of the thousands of things she learned from the wilderness. She should probably find a source of water first. As she tried to get up, she felt a burst of pain from her ankle. She sighed. It was sprained.


message 31: by TheRavenpuffWhovian, Creator of the TARDIS (new)

TheRavenpuffWhovian (strawberryprince) | 52 comments Mod
(I'm back!)


message 32: by lorena (new)

lorena | 72 comments ((hi!))


message 33: by TheRavenpuffWhovian, Creator of the TARDIS (new)

TheRavenpuffWhovian (strawberryprince) | 52 comments Mod
(Hey!)


message 34: by Julia (new)

Julia “Jay.. can you walk?” Jazmyn adjusted Kiara. Her shoulder screamed in pain. “Check, check for others. Quickly.” She felt nauseous.


message 35: by lorena (new)

lorena | 72 comments Lorelai pushed herself using a pole in the corner. She limped over to the door in front of her and saw more bodies on the ground.


message 36: by TheRavenpuffWhovian, Creator of the TARDIS (new)

TheRavenpuffWhovian (strawberryprince) | 52 comments Mod
"Yeah, I'm fine. I mean, my legs are fine. I can help one of them walk with my left arm." He tried to get his seatbelt off, but it was jammed. He used the glass shard again, to cut the belt.

((In what order should we speak?))


message 37: by Julia (new)

Julia ((Um, order of joining? If someone’ not in we can skip over them, but, yeah...))


message 38: by lorena (new)

lorena | 72 comments ((Oh, ok))


message 39: by TheRavenpuffWhovian, Creator of the TARDIS (new)

TheRavenpuffWhovian (strawberryprince) | 52 comments Mod
(So, Mimi, you, me, Lora?)


message 40: by lorena (new)

lorena | 72 comments (yup)


message 41: by TheRavenpuffWhovian, Creator of the TARDIS (new)

TheRavenpuffWhovian (strawberryprince) | 52 comments Mod
(K, so Lora goes next, I guess)


message 42: by lorena (last edited Apr 07, 2018 03:06PM) (new)

lorena | 72 comments Lorelai pushed open another door, grabbing a sharp piece of steel on the way. She suddenly felt her feet slip and landed flat on her back. She screamed out in pain and looked around, wondering what caused her slip. Her eyes widened. It was a gun!


message 43: by TheRavenpuffWhovian, Creator of the TARDIS (new)

TheRavenpuffWhovian (strawberryprince) | 52 comments Mod
(When Mimi's back, she can continue.)


message 44: by Mimi 'Pans' (new)

Mimi 'Pans' Herondale ((i'm back for a little bit))

Kiara screamed in pain again when her arm was accidentally moved.


message 45: by TheRavenpuffWhovian, Creator of the TARDIS (new)

TheRavenpuffWhovian (strawberryprince) | 52 comments Mod
"Here, let me help." said Jay. He put his arm under Kiara's shoulder.


message 46: by TheRavenpuffWhovian, Creator of the TARDIS (new)

TheRavenpuffWhovian (strawberryprince) | 52 comments Mod
(Sorry, I went out of order!)


message 47: by Julia (new)

Julia ((Tis chill))

“C’mon, out of the plane.” Jazmyn grunted and started walking through the narrow aisle.


message 48: by lorena (new)

lorena | 72 comments Lorelai's eyes widened again. There were some figures in the distance! "Hello?" she called out to them. She grabbed her gun closer to her, in case they were dangerous.


message 49: by Mimi 'Pans' (new)

Mimi 'Pans' Herondale Kiara glanced thankfully at the boy and then looked ahead and saw a girl shouting in the distance, she pointed her out to the other two.


message 50: by TheRavenpuffWhovian, Creator of the TARDIS (new)

TheRavenpuffWhovian (strawberryprince) | 52 comments Mod
"Hey! Who is that? What are you holding!? We don't want to fight!" He was getting ready to run.


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