I'm Trying to Get a Book Published! discussion

Hey! I'm Kriss, that’s my nickname anyway... I'm a girl, and love to read and write, perferably fantasy and urbane fantasy. I'm not currently trying to get anything published, but i really want to. I'd like to keep my age classified.
I love nature, and I find that a source of inspiration for much of what I write, I love animals especially big-cats. One day I want to be a published author.
Right now I'm working on two diffrent novels, one is called The Black Rose and is part of a trilogy, genre is an urbane fantasy, its paused on chapter three, though I have more writen, I'm editing it...
The other novel I'm working on is called Shadows of Light and is also a fantasy, its a single book in itself centered on a demon named Lumiere, the Demon of Light, I'm trying to get at least 50,000 words on it, but so far I only have 11,676.
I've also writen a few poems, and a short story (The Painted Meadow) But thats basically all.

Heres my writing, I could really use some feedback ^^
http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/2...

Hi Kriss,

I'm going to check out your writing. I'll make sure to leave some commments for you.

alright, thanks ^^

I LOVED it!

Shadows of light that is, I didnt read anything else ><

Lol, thanks, and thats the main one I'm working on write now, the rest are more things I've wrote and posted because I had nothing better to do >.< I just posted chapter fourteen a minute ago... Is there anything I should change? Or anything about its thats not very good?

Not at all.

I can't wait to see how the demons play out >:D

And I know how it is.

I'm working mainly on my fallen angel and where are you and the others, well I'm not so sure of just yet ><

I'amber. wrote: "And I know how it is.

I'm working mainly on my fallen angel and where are you and the others, well I'm not so sure of just yet ><"

Cool ^^ I love writing about angels and demons... That got me a little lost though, sorry, its getting late where I am...

I'amber. wrote: "Not at all.

I can't wait to see how the demons play out >:D"

Lol, its going to be fun to write about what happens next... Hehe.

Lmao, it's mmkay.

It's late here too; 119am.

Ah, I like writing about angels and all too [:

Mostly faries tho :D

I like farie books, but i dont know if I'd bee good at writing them... Most of what I've writen is based on shapeshifters, weres, and mainly angels and demons :)

I like to, but here lately I havn't been really holding it, like keep writing it, you know?

yeah. I hate it when that happens to me...

Or writers bloock, it's like UGH!

sorry its taken me so long to resond, my connection was being weird... I hate writers blocks, in fact I'm having one right now for one of my favorite books... it sucks.

I know how you feel, I'm that way with my fallen angel right now.

It bothers me sooo much >.<

I know >.< When it happens I end up getting frustrated and start writing another book, I am determaned to finish the one I'm working on now...

LMAO!

Same here!

Gawd, I just wann get donw with it tho at the same time to see ow it turns, you know?

Yes, thats how its like when I write most things.

Yeah, I'm not sure if it's like something most people would read, you know?

But for me it's something new, diff.

I enjy writing, I really do but URGH I just wannn get over this writers blooock!

Haha, I got a writers block for 'wrong one' and I was cleaning and it then got over it becuz while I was cleaning it just popped in my head XD

XD it happens like that sometimes, i wish something like that would hury up and happen to me :)

Yeah, same.

Who knows, maybe it'll happen tonight :D

:D Maybe... But I doubt it... at least I'm on a role with Shadows of Light.

With is always good ;D

:D Yep... Chapter Fifteen is going well so far.

Mmm, let me know when you get done :D

I just did, lol... gota post it...

Aha, okay :DDD

:D Just posted it, but I dont know how much I like the ending of this chapter..

Give me a few minutes mkayy?

alright ^^

I'm going to bed, night amber ^^

Sweat dreams, sorry I had to do something.

I'll read it tomorrow, I gotta go to bed too ):

Kris, sorry it took me so long to read the last up dated chapter.

I was kinda busy, and I had company so I didn't get to it to now.

Lol, but I LOVED it.

Can NOT wait to see how it plays out.

However, the first two paragraphs are the same, just thught I'd let you know :D

I'amber. wrote: "Kris, sorry it took me so long to read the last up dated chapter.

I was kinda busy, and I had company so I didn't get to it to now.

Lol, but I LOVED it.


Can NOT wait to see how it plays..."


Lol, thanks, and I fixed the chapter-thing... I didnt mean to make them repeat lol.
I'm just starting to write the next chapter, which is incedently Part Two ^^

Yeeeek!

Let me know AS SOON as you put it up.

:D

lol, alright :D
I can post the poem that I'm putting at the very begining if you want, it kind of tells about what happens... but not really, its more the theme of what happens, :P

If you want [:

It's up to you.

;D

:)
Oh great, thy storm!
Winds cast astray this falling day,
Spires sway and tumble,
The prowling beast below, no longer kept at bay,
The demons came answer, the call of darkness as it rose,
Knowing that the time was near,
The time in which the world would hear the Angel’s bitter lies,
Would hear the Demon’s rising cries.

Ombre is actually in this part of the book.

Oh my.

I love that, like really love it.

Did u wrute that or like get it and putting it on there?

Mmm, can not wait, I'm so excited just can't hide it ;D

Hhahaha!

I didn't realize you wrote the painted meadow till now ><

I loved it, I write story stories sometimes but NEVER that good at all!

I'm jelly of your writing skills.

I almost cried when I red it BTW, I fell in love with it.

I'amber. wrote: "Oh my.

I love that, like really love it.

Did u wrute that or like get it and putting it on there?

Mmm, can not wait, I'm so excited just can't hide it ;D

Hhahaha!"

lol, the poem is mine, I wrote it a seconed ago to fit this part of the story ^^ And btw I really like My Fallen Angel, it sounds really good so far.

I love it [:

Thanks, it's work in progess... a slowww one, but still [:

Lol.

I'amber. wrote: "I love it [:

Thanks, it's work in progess... a slowww one, but still [:

Lol. "
:D Everything has to start somewhere... Lol, this book started from a role play character.

Omfg!

Aha I do the same thing like I don't rp, but I will read other peoples and get s story line from it >.<

Thats where I got the idea of 'wrong one'

Aha.

lol... Lumiere was my own role play character... Once I got a whole book idea from a ten seconed commercial.

wow whats it about

Lmao, really?

I got Wrong One because role play was about fallen angels and angels and what not and I came up with the story line [:

Kirilee Fey Hycanth wrote: "wow whats it about"

The commercial? I dont really remember... well for that matter know... it didnt really say anything.