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message 1: by Rita (new)

Aug 15, 2009 09:23PM

up for critique: the prologue of my complete novel Colorless. I would love some input.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

p.s. The thought are suposed to be italicized however I could not figure out how to format it.

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