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message 1: by Joseph (last edited Aug 13, 2014 08:08AM) (new)

Joseph Ballenger Something a tad inspirational.

sublimation

(Picture used from http://i.ytimg.com/vi/7f4aGupH7Cs/max...)

With arms stretched as wide as her ambition, among the ripples that frolicked beneath her swift feet, takeoff was underway. The wind patiently awaiting her ascension.

Wings of flesh and bones. Turbines formed from a pumping heart. Towards a destination filled with the unseen as clouds swayed, veiling what lied ahead in the forbidden skies.

Before she doubted her potential. No's, abuse, and rejection tore her foundation but a new runway paved with a sharpened mind, shaped a terminal that summoned anyone with enough tenacity to soar above the crowd.

By her name, she is Dreamer. And by her blood, she is true. By your heart, you can be her. Sublimation shall you pursue.


message 2: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments Wow...


message 3: by Joseph (new)

Joseph Ballenger Thanks for all your comments. I've read every one lol.


message 4: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments No problem! I try to read everything in this group...


message 5: by Joseph (new)

Joseph Ballenger Which one did you like the best out of the 4?


message 6: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments Hmm...maybe the 3rd one. They're all really good...


message 7: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
This is so good!


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