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When Tris finds Tobias she apolagices. He turns to her "Tris its not you i'm mad at its that brother of yours." Then it hits her they could carry on where they left of so she leans foward and kisses him he kisses her back soon they were full making out but when his hands go to the hem of her shirt she pushes him away. He looks at her but he is not mad he just says "Its okay" and smiles. A wave of relief washes through her and she smiles back. Then she grabs his hand and leads him to the top of the train they both lay down she snuggled into his arm and they stare at the stars "Tobias" she says "I love you". He looks at her and says "I love you to Tris". They lay there untill dawn approaches then they go back to the main level down to an even angrier Caleb. His arm were folded in front of him with a half frown half are you serious look. "Beatrice" Caleb says " I thought I told you to stay away from him." She looks at him "Why the helk should I listen to you?" then she and Tobias walk away.
I love the send when tris has to much of that Amity serum
do you want me to add that to a chapter.
Yes yes yes ( this May go on ) yes use yes ect.
okay but in the chapter ( do you remember susans little brother umm whats his name) he will go inside the fence and give tobias it okay okay. I added to All Human MI
But that means that tris don't punch peter
you do not know maybe thats why tobias has to get the serum
ya i will jist write it and you xan tell e if you like it
You are typing so fast I can just read why your writing
ya i will write it and you can tell me if you like it.
Tris opens her eyes only to realize its still night. She tries moving out of Tobias's arms only to wake him. When he sees her he smiles she smiles back. Tris says "I didn't mean to wake you." Only for Tobias to say "Actually I'm glad you did." Tris lookes around only to see that everyones asleep but her eyes linger on Marcus Eaton Tobias's dad. Then she looks at Tobias he takes her face in his hands and kisses her. First Tris is temped to push him away but doesn't she kisses him back. His hands slowly slid down to her waist and instinctivly puts her hands around his neck. Then at that moment Caleb wakes up and yells "BEATRICE!!!" Tris pulls away from Tobias and looks at him his eyes wild from what he just saw. Tobias with his hands still around tris's waist says "Umm... a little privacy here." Caleb being her older brother says "Get away from my sister. NOW!!!!" Tris shoots him a dirty look as tobias's hands leave her waist she moves her hands from his neck only for him to lean in and kiss her again this time with more passion. Caleb still being mad goes over and attemps to grab Beatrice but fails. Tobias stands up and looks at Caleb "She is NOT your little sister anymore." and walks away. Caleb goes and sits by Tris and says "I don't like him." then closes his eyes and goes to sleep. Tris still mad at him for getting mad at her boyfriend walks off to go get him.